| "Heart of the Night" Reviews/Comments [ 36 ] |
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Reviewed By: judy On: October 15, 2003 00:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWesoME! You could leave it at that chapter and I would be happy!! ITs been a while since I saw the new chapters. ^^
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Reviewed By: Suzume Tori [MediaMiner Member] On: April 05, 2003 20:18 CST
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Happy :D **cartwheels** Wooohoo! :D It is gooood! It has plot! Angst! Sexy Vampires! Love! Adventure! Revenge! And sex!
^_^ I have just been officially happi-fied. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Empress On: March 28, 2003 05:45 CST
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OH MY GOD!!! I love this story! I used to read it on FanFicion. That is until it kind of disipeared. Damn assholes and their NC17 rules! You have to update soon now! I have to know what happens! And did Duo mean Heero?! Did you kill Heero?! E-mail me when you update if you can!
Haruka671@aol.com
Thanks! |
Reviewed By: Angel of innocence On: March 05, 2003 05:54 CST
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my names angel of innocence stupid keyboard lol |
Reviewed By: Anel of innocence On: March 05, 2003 05:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its great fantastic terrific keep writing please keep writing |
Reviewed By: AngeloflightPd On: February 02, 2003 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love this story I haved love it when I found it on fan fiction before they took out NC-17 I will be waiting for the next chapter I just hope it will be soon. I don't like waiting and a lot of authers have not been up dating their stories and just leaving people hanging. I just hope the next chapter will be up soon. |
Reviewed By: Thia On: February 01, 2003 02:04 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT TOOK YOU SO LONG!!!
It's like I've been waiting for a thousand years or something, but I was really glad to read your next chapter it get's better and better.
Please do countinue I enjoy each and every word. |
Reviewed By: anonymous celebrity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 29, 2003 14:20 CST
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*thinks about what just went on in the chapter* So it's looking like everything's about to turn out all right, huh? It's been a wild ride... and it may not be over just yet, taking into consideration that book. ;) Hopefully this marks the END of your writer's block, and you'll wrap this baby up soon. Like I said, helluva time it's been, and most certainly enjoyable. :) Great work. |
Reviewed By: shampooo On: January 27, 2003 11:36 CST
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Yes Yes Yes !! *chears* Oh my I waited FOREVER for you to update ^____^ I love your fic, its very well written ^^ And I like the Idea of Q and Tro like this very much.. And Duo is sooo cool in this one *g*
great fic!!! Please continue it ^^ (faster..*g*) |
Reviewed By: Sky High Tempest On: January 26, 2003 21:01 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I adore this story, it's one of my favs. I like how you've used such a popular genre and made it your own.
With all the other countless Vamp stories out there, your's really outshines the rest. With its dark and romantically charged plot and characters, as soon as it ends it's sure to be a classic.
Thanks for being a worthy writer to follow. ^-^
P.S Why don't you put your other fics up here? They were really good, before FF.N went chicken. |
Reviewed By: Relwarc On: January 25, 2003 22:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's finally been updated! Thank God! It's about time too!
I'm so glad that Quatre's back on his feet. I think I know what the "solution" that Trowa found is. But I'll wait until the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: The Lady of Unsanity On: January 21, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Crikey! It's a big one, it is. That there, ladies and gents, is a good fanfic! Very rare bugger, particularly of this variety. Only problem wi' it is the rarity of seeing the tail end of 'im. He usually hides that, revealing just a bit at a time to the patient watcher. The end is supposed to be fantastic, and as you can tell by the front end, ee's got some lovely textures. We'll just camp out 'ere by his home and wait for the next bit then, wot? |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 09, 2003 12:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm not sure how to review reasonably, but I'll try.
I've given you a 9 for your style of writing since it's kinda darkish and angsty... VERY angsty like when the first chapter was about rape and then mysterious guardian and then Naki... that's not bad.
I know I've reviewed it previously with 10 for your spelling, but it seems like some words are either misspelled and misused like for example when you put 'your' for 'you are'
The creativity for 10 since it's an AU fiction and a VERY well-written one also. Good job!
A 9 for enjoyment is because I'm so emotional sometimes. I broke down a few times when reading your fic. But if you want I can give you a 10 anytime.
Keep on writing! Don't feel down because I've rated them with too much nines. Keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Jessie Shockey On: January 09, 2003 02:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was pleasantly surprised by this fic. I'm glad I decided to read it, after all. Generally, I try to stear away from vampire AU stories, as they are very often well done. This story, however, is excellent, and I was truely disappointed when I reached the end of the currently posted chapters. I will most definatly be checking often to see if it has been updated.
Thank you for an enjoyable read.
Jessie Shockey
http://lemon-creampuff.org |
Reviewed By: anonymous celebrity [MediaMiner Member] On: January 02, 2003 11:29 CST
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O.O Oh. My. God... poor Quatre and Trowa!! And Bastian, too... hell, poor EVERYBODY (except Nakki, I'm glad he's dead)... Write more, please! |
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