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"Dominion" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ]
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 Reviewed By: leta [MediaMiner Member]  On: October 18, 2008 05:11 CDT
Comment/Review:
WOW, there is just no other word. this fic was BEAUTIFULLY written and an enjoyment to read. fantastic job!!
 Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member]  On: July 06, 2006 14:32 CDT
Rating(s):
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
This was a really interesting story. I like how this was set up and it's also nice to see another side to Kakarotto. Nice work.
 Reviewed By: tenshu  On: August 05, 2005 11:43 CDT
Comment/Review:
Geez... Did you have to make Goku so cold? I sorta like his happy go lucky and everything will work out self. I mean, when he smiles all the time and is goofing around. Thats when i like him the best, but o well, this fanfic is great nevertheless, and i'm now gonna go read the next chappy!
 Title: I came back to review your fic!!!
Reviewed By: Ai no Sakura [MediaMiner Member]  On: February 24, 2005 12:51 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I read this fic... ano... year? 2 ago? *ducks sharp objects* I KNOW!!! But back then I wasn't even a member and was new to all this fan fiction and yaoi stuff... Demo... I came back to drop the review you deserve! I would've done so in the first place, demo I hadn't known how to do so... *blush* DEMO!!! Now I'm the 40th to review, so I'm happy. A weight has been lifted off my shoulders... ^_^ I love your fics and I know I should review them, demo at another time! Sayonara. YOurs truely, Sakura ^_^
 Reviewed By: Myself  On: March 08, 2003 02:55 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh my Gods in holy Heaven and the demons in unholy Hell...I cannot believe i just read that on-line. I never find quality this...excellent! on-line. Never. I just finished reading this at 1 a.m. and I'll be damned if i don't have some great dreams tonight. I love it, I love your fics, I love Vejiita-sama, Kakkarotto, and Radditzsu, and I love you. Marry me. Please.

Off to read more of your fics~~Me
 Reviewed By: Shi-Saiyan [MediaMiner Member]  On: March 07, 2003 22:56 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wow. Just, WOW. This is one of the best stories I've ever read! Not just fanfics, but STORIES, as in, even counting the actual books. When Jady told me you were good, I just came to test the waters, but I got sucked in immediately! You are a great writer! Now, I gotta go read all your other fics!
 Reviewed By: Hope_Poe26  On: March 04, 2003 18:05 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
My deepest feelings that this is the best story I have ever read as of yet. You r a great writer.

Keep it up!
 Reviewed By: Dynishra The Vampire [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 30, 2003 06:53 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
OMG! ISOLOVETHISFICSODAMNSUPERMUCH!!

Hey ya.. im Dynisha, and i have to admit Dominion is one of the BEST MOTHER FUCKERS OUT THERE! i love his fic!!!!!!

^^ oh my VEGETA!!! i love him in this fic!

Yes i know is sad.. im another otaku.. trapped for ever to write and draw only of him

Any way go you Xero Sky! you ROCK! ive read all your other fics and all i can say is.. you deserve a salami named after you!

because what you write is hot!

damn that was lame..
JADY! HIT ME IN THE HEAD WITH A POT!

ive lost it!

chow then!

The more fics the better!

AW! some one stoll my pills again!!! >.
 Reviewed By: kamehameha_roshi [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 19, 2003 21:54 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
WOW! I know alot of people have said it, but its true! This is the BEST fic EVER!! I mean it has real class! Lemon, but without it being distasteful or overpowering! Well Done! Great Job! I look forward to reading more of your fics!!
 Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 17, 2003 18:33 CST
Rating(s):
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Oh wow!! What an EXCELLENT lemon!! It was sweet, sentimental, and sexy! God, I love that pairing!! Such a wonderful fic, I'm so sad to see that it's over.
 Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member]  On: January 17, 2003 07:23 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Xero, I've admired you always since I started reading your fics, but I must say, you've outdone yourself with the epilogue. It was so intense, so very detailed, lively, colorful that I kept seeing each and every picture in front of my eyes. I especially liked the bit at the graveyard and your description of the throne room. You are an excellent writer, your style is absoutely flawless. if you ever feel like doing a shared fic I'd be more than honored. Though i don't think I could keep up with your standards. You are a genius. Please write more soon!

You'rs truly devoted half fallen angel

Dark Serapha
 Reviewed By: catwoman  On: January 15, 2003 11:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10
Comment/Review:
can you please post the dam epilogy all rfeady...... overall rating is because i'm impation
 Reviewed By: gemini  On: January 14, 2003 21:14 CST
Rating(s):
Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this was kick arz i love it but i think i would have been nice to see g/v had one night without the pain
 Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 16, 2002 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Man .... That was one heck of an ending. Not that it's over yet. Epilouge!! ::crosses fingers in hopes of lemony goodness:: Everyone's happy ... even Turles. Gotta feel sorry for the kid, even if he did try to kill Kakkarot and Vejiita-sama. Here's for Vejiita x Kakkarot, and maybe Bardock x Turles. ^^ Ja ne, minna-chan, and happy holidays!!
 Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member]  On: December 14, 2002 14:08 CST
Rating(s):
Overall Rating: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I've been saving this fic for last, until I had time to sit and read it, and my five year old is ready to call DCFS and report me for neglect! I've spent my entire afternoon here reading!!

WOW is about the most coherent thought I can wrap my brain around right now. This fic was absolutely AMAZING!

It goes without saying that you write among the best yaoi lemons in the fandom, so I'm not at all surprised at how wonderful they were. The story, however, blew me away upon it's own merits! Excellent plotline, reference to events in earlier chapters are related in later chapters (which seems to be rare lately! Many authors seem to forget what they wrote early on!), richly developed characters. Just an all around wonderful fic! I'm anxiously awaiting the epilogue! Can we hope for a Turles X Bardock lemon? ~bats eyelashes~

The fact that I have now read ALL of your fics (at least here at MM) just struck me. WAAAAAAH!!! I can't believe I don't have any more to look forward to reading in the immediate future! I SINCERELY hope that you continue putting out the excellent quality fics that you have been writing! :o)
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