| "Dominion" Reviews/Comments [ 43 ] |
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Reviewed By: LadyJessy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 20:46 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh man, that was good. I was beginning to think you'd NEVER update again! It was interesting to see whats going on in all their heads. I'd still sort of like to see Goku kick the shit out of Vegeta (just to prove to himself that he can) before they make up. I can't wait to see what happens next! :) Great Job! Don't keep us all in suspence for so long though! :) |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 17:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow. another great chapter of a even greater storie. i hope only kakarotto defeat vegeta to near dead, but not killing him, and fled, crah on earth and left vegeta behind. hit is head. forgetting many things and so on. and vegeta goes or let searching for his mate.
so you can hopefull continue this with a sequel, then i don't like it that the storie is too soon
finished. i love this storie to much. i hope it
never end. |
Reviewed By: sirencirce [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 10:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You can't stop now! This is a great fic. Please continue. |
Reviewed By: dru and larry On: November 11, 2002 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dru: pppppllllllllllleeeeeeeeaaaaaaassssssssseeeeeeeee write more or the seymour doll gets it
Larry *sweat drops* your the only one who likes the annoying one. please write more please its sooooo well write and a great plo...........
dru: i wannnaaaaaa knooooowwww mmmore |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 01:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*looks around* Baka readers...REVIEW PEOPLE!!! *hides cause she herself is LATE reviewing this lates AWESOME CHAPTER!!!*
Truly this is killing me, more so now that I am so deep into Restraints and Liberations, I now *connect* more with Turles. *sighs* This is wonderful, and horrible, and fablous and...and...and...*sobs* Oh PLEASE MAKE IT A HAPPY ENDING!!!!!!! *flings herself on Xe* Please please please...I'll do ANYTHING!!!!!
*snifflesniffle* And besides...I want the link to your blog!!! *smirks*
*makes BIG chibi eyes* Pwease???
Talon |
Reviewed By: ranitagoyle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 17:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think that I have figured it out. I am willing to bet that it wasn't Kakkarot that Bardock saw in his vision, but Turles. I can't wait to read how it turns out. |
Reviewed By: Goku's Goddess [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 03:46 CST
Comment/Review:
very very nice story!!
i would have to say it is one of my faves. |
Reviewed By: Lully On: October 17, 2002 11:26 CDT
Comment/Review:
This story is excellent. When I read your work I have my breath taken away by your imagery. It's obvious that number of reviews don't reflect the quality of the work in every case or this work would have so much more.
Anxious to see how the story ties up. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. On: October 17, 2002 01:56 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'm so glad to see this fic on an uncensored site. I can enjoy this fic in it's fullest and truest form. Please update again soon! The suspense is killing me! |
Reviewed By: demonsummoner On: October 05, 2002 17:12 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
^_^ this has to be my favorite DBZ fiction ever. i usually have a lot more to say but to put it simple this fic just takes my breath away |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2002 06:07 CDT
Comment/Review:
*reads latest chapters*
........ sadist.
;) |
Reviewed By: POAS [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 22:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
How dare you!! You stopped right there!! *Cries* I must have MORE! Man I love the suspense, though it is a pain in the ass. Post more when you can :)).
@_@ POAS :P |
Reviewed By: Retrogrrl On: October 02, 2002 14:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yay I had to come look your fic up over in case FF.net keeps up the weirdness. LOve it! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 05:20 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yeee! *glomp* I've read a great deal of this story somewhere else (FF.net?), and it's one of my faves. For once, an A/U Vegetasei story with class! I enthusiastically look forward to reading the newest chapters... |
Reviewed By: Dark Serapha [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 13:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I've said it in the past.
I say it in the present.
I will say it in the future.
If necessary a thousand times.
This
is
unbelivably good.
One of my very favourite stories, dearest to my heart, sheer bliss to read, eternal delight. Angst to the core. I can't find more words to praise this. I just bow down to you, Xero, and dare ask another chapter. Please. For the sake of my sanity.
Your's truly devoted half fallen angel
Dark Serapha |
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