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| "Prisoner of War" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2002 22:29 CST
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*throwing things at the screen* MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE NOOOOOOOOOWWWWWWWWW!!!! ^__^ *ahem* Sorry about that, I just came a little close to flipping when I realised that there was no more. ARRGGGHH!!! Of course, me being the lil slack person that I am couldn't find this story so I didn't even know you'd updated after chapter four until today so I spent way too much time on the net reading it all cos I just could NOT live without reading more!!
I must say Ms Maxwell that this fic is one of COOLEST things I've read in ages 'n' ages. I absolutely adored Duo talking to Quatre about Heero being feisty & looking up porn & all that, utterly priceless moment of complete humour there. (BTW, hurrah! 3+4!! They're both such spunks ^__^) & the bit when Heero & Duo were six years old was unbelievably sweet, as is Heero's ever-so-slow development into someone with emotions for Kami's sake! ^_______^ So you can understand when I implore you to update as often as humanly possible plz plz plz!!
Cheers,
--Shella-chan | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 28, 2002 14:49 CST
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Hey, I'm back. Caught a lovely little virus that won't leave me alone, but I'm back.
*whew* The first part of Ch. 11 really confused me. I couldn't figure out how we went from 15 to 6 years old. I felt kinda silly for not realizing it was a dream. But I love the new twist in the story.
And just so you know, when I compliment you, even though it sounds like gushing, I really mean it.
I'm sorry this is such a short review, but I don't have the energy to think, much less write and spell correctly. Thanks for responding with such a long answer for me. And I promise my next review will be longer. | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 22, 2002 15:50 CDT
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um.. yeah, me again. I just reread my review (I need to start doing that before I hit Submit.) and I don't think cliffnote is the right word. No, actually it isn't. I just thought of the right word. Cliffhanger. It's Cliffhanger, not cliffnote. Sorry 'bout that. | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 22, 2002 15:48 CDT
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Oi, sorry for taking so long to review! I just got here. I've been really busy the past few days and have just now been able to get on the computer.
But look what I found! Four new chapters and a story that is moving along nicely! Very cool! Love the new chapters! I like how you make Duo and Heero interact!
So... new chapters? More chapters? You've got the story moving but left it on a cliffnote. I really can't wait for more.
I'm glad your mom is ok. Well, I'd love to talk more but I really need to go. I'll talk to ya later! | Reviewed By: dark angel of the night [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 09:37 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
good but make chapters longer | Reviewed By: Shella-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 12, 2002 21:20 CDT
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Ok, I'm for once going to be serious right now.
Stop putting yourself down!!!
This story rocks, all right? It kicks absolute ass. I seriously cannot understand why Dewshine is the only person to recognise the complete and utter coolness of this story. (btw, go Dewshine! Your genius in appreciating this story is second only to Theresa Maxwell's genius in writing this!)
So yes, I like this story. Yes, it is good. Yes, it has a really cool plot. Yes, it's really well written. Yes, Duo is the most adorable bishie in the history of everything!
"He bounded to the Japanese youth's side in a manner only he could pull." That little sentence is just sweetness itself!! I love how you've written Heero & Duo's different personalities clashing in this fic, it's a great contrast at any time but you've just got it so down pat in this. Much wunderfoolness!
If you don't stop saying 'Oh, this sucks, I'm so ashamed' I may have to flame you. >:[ | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 14, 2002 13:35 CDT
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Ok, first off, thanks Shella-chan! Glad I'm not the only one reviewing anymore!
Next, I am so sorry for my last review. I reread that and am now totally embarrassed. I don't know what that was all about.
Alright! You have anohter chapter in! Love it, love it! Now I'm going to be completely honest here. (Not to say that I haven't been already, but I haven't told you this yet.) Generally, I don't like something that by the 5'th chapter has no real plot to it. But this one I really like! I keep coming back just waiting to see if there's been an update on "Prisoner of War" (which, by the way, is a really cool title). Anyhow, just wanted you to know that yes reviewers (even the more picky ones) do like the story, and Shella-chan's right, you should stop putting yourself down!
I don't know why it took me so long to say that.
Can't wait for more!
P.S. Is your mom ok? None of my business, I know, but totaled car usually equals hurt driver. | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 10, 2002 14:06 CDT
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Ahhhh! Stupid mediaminer! It deleted the first three sentences of my review and made everything white!!! Sorry 'bout that. I won't repeat what the first part of the review was. It was my lunatic rambling and going nuts. But I am glad that you like hearing from me! Thanks! | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 10, 2002 14:02 CDT
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*grins happily and does a dance* heh heh... you have no idea how much or how long I can talk.... bwaahahahaha
*ahem* *cough* Geez...ok, enough of that. I let the little lunatic inside me out for a minute and look what happens...
Anyhow, love the new chapter! I like the finger-swiping-cookie-dough-off-Duo's-nose thing. I found that amusing! Only problem, where's the angst? You promised angst! I want the angst! *shoves the lunatic back in it's hole*
Sorry, I know the angst will be coming in later chapters. Keep going! I'll review when you have another chapter out!
Now, if you'll excuse me, I'll go eat something. Low blood sugar makes me a little... crazy. ^_^ | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 04, 2002 13:15 CDT
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Then it's your lucky day, cause I'm back! *blushes at how cliche "it's your lucky day" sounds* Thank you for clearing everything up! It makes alot more sense now. Also, thanks for writing back to me. I like it when I review and the author writes back. ~_^
Anywho, it's short but flowing nicely. Chapters are gonna get bigger, eh? Cool. Write more soon and, if you want, I'll review again. See ya!
(Sorry for kinda raambling up above..) | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: October 03, 2002 14:10 CDT
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Ok, a little confusing, but well written. I got the impression that Duo is an Oz Officer and Heero is a Gundam Pilot. Is that right? I like how you have their charactors. Please continue and have more chapters soon! | Reviewed By: Dewshine On: November 16, 2002 14:48 CST
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Dang it!!! I know I should know who the person is at the end. But I can't think of anyone. Grrrrr... Please write more soon, ok? Even though you're really busy, and even if it's just a little bitty chapter, please put more soon! I need to know who that person is!!!
Hey, I don't care. Rant, talk, ramble, yell.... do whatever you want. I have no problems with reading long paragraphs.
I can't think of anything else to say... bummer. Well, talk to you later! Sorry I didn't say much, but I've been sick all week so nothing interesting has happened. Ja! | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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