| "Heart of the Dragon Master" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: Cool!
Reviewed By: Aurora DeNeil [MediaMiner Member] On: January 26, 2005 10:38 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Totally awesome Seto/Serenity fic. They're one of my fave straight YGO couples. (I also like Yugi/Tea and Joey/Mai) I especially like that part at the end of the epiloge "I will not kill Wheeler. I will not kill Wheeler." HA HA HA! That was cute! A great site to learn more about Seto and Bakura's past lives in Egypt is www.janime.net and FYI, Seto was actually Yami's cousin!
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Reviewed By: matt On: February 04, 2003 21:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the best!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: jster1983 On: December 03, 2002 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Call me loopy but I don't think Yami the pharoah killed Seth the priest (By the way I am talking about the quasi-sequel you wrote)If you ask me the evil Bakura did it and fixed it so that the priest Seth would think that Yami did it and what is Dragon mountain by the way I just want to know? |
Reviewed By: w@// 0f i//u$i0N On: December 01, 2002 12:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ur the best at writin' fan-fic's!! this one was great!!! :D |
Reviewed By: jster1983 On: November 27, 2002 18:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think your story is cool altough there can only be 3 of the same monster in most cases allowed in any deck you could get more but you would need to use monster reborn twice with a magician of faith in your deck but what ever it is your fic I'm just reading it. By the way I think that your story is cool along with the semi-sequel. Serenity is my favorite minor character because of her innocence and her big brother joey is my favorite character becuase of his sheer dumb luck and his cleverness not to mention how he weeds out most of the competition that he and Yugi get alltough Yugi does his fair share of work. |
Reviewed By: Starwake321 On: October 26, 2002 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was a very god fic. If your out of ideas you could have a fic about Mokuba and a girl. Seeing how you called Joey overprotective. I think it woul be interesting to see how protective Kaiba is. Oh well it's just a suggestion. |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: October 26, 2002 16:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I think this was a really good story. If you're still doing chapters later on, I'll read em! |
Reviewed By: Onua Wingstar On: October 12, 2002 19:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. This is one of the best Yu-Gi-Oh! fanfics I've ever had the privaledge of reading. You are a spectacular author, and like I said before, SetoXSerenity is my fav couple! I especially love the way you describe the romance scenes. Definetly go for a sequel! |
Reviewed By: ~Seto's Angels~ On: October 12, 2002 18:19 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey there Elf!!!!!!! Your story was in Fanfiction as well. Now I know what happens next!!!!!!!! *Yaay* Well just to tell you, your story is going extremely well. Keep up the great job Elf!!!
Chiao For Now!!!!!!!
P.S. Have you got my other review? |
Reviewed By: Alecto [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 18:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very good fic! *cringe* Argh, dubby names... Gomen, I just can't stand those names after learning all the usual mistakes dubs make... It's awfully intriguing how Kaiba-kun and Yugi-kun can be such good friends. I wish you could have put Yami in a little more. It would be cool if he and Yugi have a closer relationship because they so become really close later on. Keep writing and I'll keep reading! |
Reviewed By: black luster soldier [MediaMiner Member] On: October 05, 2002 01:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
now this is what i call a fanfic! i really wish i could put something higher than a 10 like a 1,000,000,000 and more! you hafta right more!! i've also made up a parady. don't forget more!! |
Reviewed By: Yami Justine On: October 04, 2002 17:40 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved your fan fic! It is one of the greatest Yu-Gi-Oh! fan fics I've ever read! Keep up the great work! Ur excruciatingly awesome |
Reviewed By: Jaewon On: October 04, 2002 01:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
Ah... hurry and right more. I love Seto Kaiba and angst. So hurry, hurry, hurry this is so much fun. |
Reviewed By: Onua Wingstar On: October 03, 2002 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is a REALLY, REALLY good story! *Seto x Serenity is my favie couple...* Just one little thing - Jounouchi (Joey) is NOT American; he's Japanese. The stupid dub only makes him sound that way. It's the same thing with Bakura sounding British. (HE'S NOT!) But hey - it's not your fault. We're all victims here. Keep writing! ^^) ...I wuv Seto... |
Reviewed By: setobsession [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2002 23:31 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn. you write so goooooooodddddddddddd.......
seriously......one of the best fic around.
and paring seto w/serenity is a great idea too, since they will be a couple later on in ther yugioh seasons.(man why couldn't kaiba stayed single?) |
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