| "A Simple Wish" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Title: Woot!
Reviewed By: SonVegetaUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2006 13:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
"The enternal Dragon is not a toy" HAHAHAHAHHAHAHAHA that's great! I have really enjoyed this fic. I wasn't surprised to see Trunks screw up the wording of the second wish; I thought the ending worked well. Oh, and the bit towards the end where Vegeta backs Goku into the tree was sheer comedy ^___^ Overall, great job! I'm glad you didn't give up on this fic!
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Reviewed By: SonVegetaUsagi [MediaMiner Member] On: April 12, 2005 16:07 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! I happily stumbled upon it when it was already finished ^^. (Don't feel bad about taking a while between chapters, though...I know how it is!) I've never read a fic quite like this one, and I found it very interesting how Vegeta kept returning to his 'normal' self. I, too, was hoping to see his reaction after being wished back to normal, but the way you ended it wasn't bad--it certainly saved a lot of heartache. I only have two pieces of 'criticism': 1)whatever happened to the forest ranger that Chichi wanted to hook up with? and 2)it takes a lot longer than an hour of labor to give birth--more like 12. *shrug* Who cares anyway? Great piece of fiction; I really enjoyed reading it.
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Reviewed By: theprincesjewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 20:45 CST
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*gapes. stares. looks again* OOOOOOOOOOOO! THAT WAS JUST..... *at a loss for words, floundering helplessly among the multiple adjectives to choose from and finding none that are sufficient for the job* *pouts instead* ALTERNATE ENDING! That's it. We wants the alternate ending... the what would've been if they'd just said it right! Not that that isn't realistic, that the brats would missay again, but still! *more pouting*.... oh wait! I nearly forgot! THANKS for the yummy Christmas present!
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 18, 2004 00:04 CST
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*sad little sigh* I don't suppose we can have a Christmas present of the next chapter? A whole year after the poor thing appears to have been abandoned? The year's not up, the wish isn't over... and the snuggling needs some continuation!
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: January 28, 2004 16:58 CST
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE PPPPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSEEEEEE EEE!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: bubbley freedom On: January 02, 2004 20:41 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey great story! its hilarious!! write again soon
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Title: good lord!
Reviewed By: meden-san On: January 02, 2004 14:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
so funny i nearly died! ahem............. exellent. keep up the job.
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Reviewed By: 1fanoveggie [MediaMiner Member] On: January 01, 2004 11:57 CST
Comment/Review:
This fic is describable in one word: AHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: anime_angel123 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2003 18:53 CST
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O_O I luv ur story!!! update!!
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Reviewed By: thePrincesJewel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2003 13:42 CST
Comment/Review:
More.
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Reviewed By: atshi On: November 07, 2003 18:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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i like the story. its scary, but its funny also. update, please? ^_^
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Title: Nice-very nice;)
Reviewed By: reDiCuLoUsLy_ GoOdLoOkInG On: October 04, 2003 15:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
dude this is such a *kewl* fic. Its hilarious, you usually dont see fics like thesee come together perfectly...i hope you continue writing more fics and complete this one...puh-lease... :) luving every chapter...hehe
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Reviewed By: arovak On: August 08, 2003 20:17 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey your defenetly good at making plots for stories.I luv this story, its hilarious! I hope goku will be able to figure things out. anyways write again really soon |
Reviewed By: alfa star On: June 11, 2003 15:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey luv the story !!!!!!!!!!! write again soon |
Reviewed By: kitkat On: June 01, 2003 13:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
hi! i really like this story ... and i've been missing it.
you still have this up in ff.net don't you?
please don't take too long to update again ok? |
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