| "Not Who They Seem To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] |
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Reviewed By: PharaohYami [MediaMiner Member] On: October 03, 2002 19:21 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow!!!!! I love it!!! I am in love with Yami..but him being an evil bish..oh yea..::drool:: PLEASE CONTINUE!!! That rocks. ::has Yami tied on her wall..rapes him when she feels like it:: Mwuahahaha. |
Reviewed By: Neo-QueenRini On: November 14, 2002 15:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very good. I tried to finish this on ff.net but it wouldn't let me in. Very original. |
Reviewed By: Renee the Rabid Squirrel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome two chapters there! You have a great talent
for writing. One thing though: I think it might be
Netscape's fault, I'm not a home reading this.
All the quotations marks got turned into question
marks. I could understand it, but it was a tad confusing.
Overall, great work! |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2002 22:23 CDT
Comment/Review:
Yami-kun ... Grrr ... He's being an @$$. I can't believe he'd do something like that to his own hikari, though. ::sniff:: Please get the next chapter out soon!! Ja ne, minna-chan. |
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