| "The Other Side of the Coin, Ending One" Reviews/Comments [ 22 ] |
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Reviewed By: wudelfin [MediaMiner Member] On: July 05, 2007 14:26 CDT
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wonder if it works out or can she go to the one whom seems to truely loves her. such a sad ending.
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Reviewed By: Tweety_Reviewer On: January 24, 2005 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story was short, but it had everything a story needed. And anyways, I like short stories. This one in particular was marvelous. The endings were both very noteworthy....though like most other reviewers, i preferred the 2nd ending. You're style of writing is really....fresh and classic. You're way of describing the situations and emotions of the characters were really thorough. You're a great writer...don't waste your talent. keep writing.
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Reviewed By: Neko Valor [MediaMiner Member] On: October 04, 2004 19:50 CDT
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Both endings were good...the second one with the "happily ever after (sort of) ending" is the one I prefer. Whether it be the lemon or the last part of the ending. I feel the other ending was unfinished though. Maybe you could consider rewriting it or continuing it? Just a request though. C ya l8r.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas-lover On: April 23, 2004 22:00 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
this stupit thang mestup on me this is what i achely rate it.
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Reviewed By: inuyashas-lover On: April 23, 2004 21:59 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 2 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fanfic please wright some more.
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Reviewed By: Haisha-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2004 17:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it, sad as it was... Both endings were great, but I'd have to say I liked the second the best. You are one of the best authors out there, honestly. Write more stories now, please!!
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Reviewed By: Sakura_Avalon On: February 04, 2004 21:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I truly LOVED both endings and think that you should continue with both endings with future chapters. I think that you're a very good writer. Keep up the great work. I also LOVED the story that you helped co-write Heaven and Hell.
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Reviewed By: Sundragon [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2003 12:34 CST
Comment/Review:
Sorry! I just reviewed the first story. Very interesting! Adios!
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Reviewed By: bunny678 On: November 23, 2003 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your story it was very creative and fun to read though it was a bit sad =)
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Reviewed By: bunny678 On: November 23, 2003 12:19 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really liked your story it was very creative and fun to read though it was a bit sad =)
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Reviewed By: lil_sesshi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 07, 2003 23:10 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
got to do more got to do more.that was so good...
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Reviewed By: serenity_blue On: October 30, 2003 01:48 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey I liked the second ending better... Pls. do a sequel... I liked most of your works. They have sense... not just you know... Write more. You're great!!! ^_^
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Reviewed By: Phelin On: February 27, 2003 16:12 CST
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This is the best fanfic that i was read, not only about inuyasha anime, THE BEST of all fanfics of all the animes that i read before. Good quality of language, and creativity. I can say that the cliffhanger final let our imagination work. Really good |
Reviewed By: eyes_on_the_birdie [MediaMiner Member] On: February 08, 2003 21:10 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
you should definately do more on this, it's awesome! |
Reviewed By: maribel On: January 18, 2003 22:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
::sighs:: i like this story than the other one |
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