| "Turnabout is Fair Play" Reviews/Comments [ 121 ] |
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Title: Update SOOON!!!!!!!
Reviewed By: Amaya & Miroku On: November 13, 2004 17:28 PST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm on the edge of my seat reading your fic. I want to know what's going to happen!!!!!!!! Arrrrgggghhh!!!! It's very frustrating, but you take your time,and I hope that you'll update soon.Thanks. much love, Amaya
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Reviewed By: futekioosha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2004 21:56 PDT
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You can't be serious??? I'm sitting here just reading along, getting very involved in this fic, and all of a sudden it comes to a complete stop, no brakes, no airbag, no seatbelt...and crash--NO more fic :( on top of that the fic hasn't been updated in well over a year...where did you go? Why did you suck us in if you were going to abandon this work...it's great and I would really love to finish reading it someday.
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Reviewed By: missy manda On: September 25, 2004 22:57 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wtf! y havent u continued! dirty dirty dirty mean person!please i really wish ud add more!missy manda
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Title: one of the best
Reviewed By: fallenangel7583 [MediaMiner Member] On: September 17, 2004 00:11 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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i definatly have had to say (after spending more time reading these stories then i do sleeping) that this is by far one of the better stories that i have yet to read. the character portrayal is right on key as is the dialogue. wonderful sequence and plot action. i would love to see this as one episode. keep it up and though it is a year later, see if you can add anything to it.
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Reviewed By: ScottishFae [MediaMiner Member] On: September 13, 2004 23:27 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I absolutely adore this. It's so cute and I love how you portray Inuyasha as so sweet sometimes and ooooh, I just can't put into words all the goodness that radiates from this fic. You have an excellent style of writing, and I'm currently going through all your fanfics and reading them b/c I can't get enough of your excellent writing. I wish I could write as well as you. I do hope you update this sometime soon, I know if you get caught up in things and have trouble updating, the same thing is happening to me. I really wish that you would at least attempt to update this or any of your excellent fics sometime in the near future. Thanks! Until Next Time...Sfae
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Reviewed By: why? On: August 25, 2004 20:35 PDT
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why isn't it updated here anymore? www.iridescent-dreams.net/iy/index.htm
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Reviewed By: Shisou Ikari On: July 28, 2004 13:41 PDT
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This is becomming a theme...the more I look, the more unfinished, great stories I find. Like I've said before, it hurts, as I love a great story. I will always watch for your update. However, I'm glad I read others' reviews. As a reviewer has previously mentioned, you have more here: www.iridescent-dreams.net/iy/index.htm Time to go read! Keep it up!
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Reviewed By: peachy pink On: July 15, 2004 15:04 PDT
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Dear Ookam-chan, After seeing many of the reviews you have received for your stories on different, especially TiFP, I feel like I should apologize on behalf of those who were/are so ignorant to the fact that you DO have a life. I hope you do not believe that all your readers are so rude and essentially fucked up because it's certainly not true. Although we may all be anticipating your next update, some of us do try not to pester you too much and will continue to "hail you as master of inuyasha smut" regardless of what you choose to do. *wink* So to end my own shpiel, I won't wish you any physical harm or illness as motivation; instead, I hope that your life outside the fandom is going well and that maybe...you'll write a nice sarcastic little piece to all the obnoxious assholes who piss you off. Perhaps after they read that, they'll understand that pathetic whining and threats aren't working, especially the ones that say "it's your responsibility" to keep on writing just so that they can keep on living. Honestly, if I was you, I would've written a public rant ages ago, but I'm guessing you must have considerable self-control. Anyway, Cheers and good luck.
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Reviewed By: skeezo On: June 30, 2004 02:02 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hurry the heck up and finish this story will ya please i know it has been awhile since you have up dated but please finish this stoy so i can move onto another one thankx
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Reviewed By: skeezo2003 On: June 30, 2004 01:59 PDT
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Reviewed By: Elf_rose On: June 29, 2004 09:26 PDT
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I've noticed that you never finish any of your stories. I could give you a list of your stories that I've read and there all incomplete. Please just delete them, that would better than keeping them up on all the sites you've put them on like you're going to update one day when you're obviously not.
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Reviewed By: MissNikki On: May 25, 2004 07:24 PDT
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Okay...I've been waiting and I feel the right to tell you that I think you have writers block. What's with the no new chapter deal and not authors notes??? I don't understand and niether do i appreciate. But good story start working again. Thank you and love you
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Reviewed By: candycorngirl On: April 08, 2004 15:50 PDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this story it is better than great i have no words. i'm reading it on fanfiction since you stoped updateing on media miner but thats ok cause this is the best story ever. :)
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Reviewed By: Kitsune Bi [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 19:24 PST
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I've read this story on Iridescent Dreams and on fanfiction.net and even though you stopped updating on Media Miner, I have to say that this story is better than great. My favourite part (even though you havn't written it on MM) is when Kagome is fighting Inuyasha after she fought Sesshoumaru and Inuyasha is fighting her like a father and fighting its pup. That was cool. And my favourite line so far in the fic is the last line in the last chapter that you wrote and that was Inuyasha saying "You stubborn, temperamental bitch, I would have beaten your ass for this kind of behavior a long time ago if I didn't love you so fucking much!" ^ ^ That was when he first said he loved her. Love that line and this story so keep up the good work! Oh and I also like your lemon chapters and Kagome and Inuyasha's relationship after they mated. I'll be back, yup. Ja ne
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Title: fantastic
Reviewed By: ptbear [MediaMiner Member] On: March 16, 2004 17:57 PST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awesome story. Can't wait for the update. Please do so soon. Love the story.
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