Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started to really, really like it because it was funny and sort of creative, and the female character is Yukari, who I really like. But then she turns out to be an evil bitch, and Hitomi, the character in the anime who has EVERYTHING, takes over. So that made me not like it as much. Your grammar and spelling isn't very good, and your use of punctuation is scarce, so some parts got confusing. But it would be nice to see how the rest of the story turns out. |
