| "Van the Man Whore" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kya77 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 01, 2004 18:53 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok I'm loving it. It is really great.
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Reviewed By: Naira On: January 18, 2004 16:56 CST
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Reviewed By: C.A. [MediaMiner Member] On: August 02, 2003 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
WRITE MORE!
-C.A. |
Reviewed By: shadow demon [MediaMiner Member] On: July 28, 2003 03:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like this fic very much please finish it.
thank you
shadow demon |
Reviewed By: sk8erang0l [MediaMiner Member] On: March 20, 2003 19:27 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 2 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 3 of 10 Comment/Review:
it was pretty boring, everything is too...vague. u need more detail, and more...something. |
Reviewed By: SabineballZ [MediaMiner Member] On: March 07, 2003 17:24 CST
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As I alredy tld you at ff.net, yu gotta go on!! This story is absolutly cool!! PLESAE GO ON ASAP! |
Reviewed By: sel On: March 02, 2003 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoy it so far. Can't wait till you update it. Hope it's soon. See ya |
Reviewed By: Kerbuddy On: February 24, 2003 06:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like this story so far! I KNEW HE WAS GAY!!!!!! FINALLY SOMEONE KNOWS THE REAL STORY BEHIND ALLEN!!! i love this story so far and REALLY hope that you keep on writing it! dont give up! there is hope! ( )( )
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(lookie! it's a mouse!!!) ^
kerbuddy |
Reviewed By: Game Gurl On: January 13, 2003 17:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
its cool its like thi would be a movie |
Reviewed By: blyss On: November 11, 2002 13:28 CST
Comment/Review:
please? i love this story and have been waiting for you to update since this was at ff.net. |
Reviewed By: Sel On: October 23, 2002 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loved the fic. Can't wait till next chapter |
Reviewed By: Sel On: October 23, 2002 18:05 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Loned the fic. Can't wait till next chapter |
Reviewed By: Koganei Kaoru no Hikari [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 20:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 4 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
I started to really, really like it because it was funny and sort of creative, and the female character is Yukari, who I really like. But then she turns out to be an evil bitch, and Hitomi, the character in the anime who has EVERYTHING, takes over. So that made me not like it as much. Your grammar and spelling isn't very good, and your use of punctuation is scarce, so some parts got confusing. But it would be nice to see how the rest of the story turns out. |
Reviewed By: sky On: October 19, 2002 18:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Alright! Awesome fic! Keep up the great work!! |
Reviewed By: I am me On: October 07, 2002 16:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very Interesting! Very! i stil like it tho |
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