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| "Kotahitanga / The Return" Reviews/Comments [ 31 ] | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] | Reviewed By: Sailor Taichichi Vegeta (too lazy to log in) On: March 05, 2004 15:20 CST
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"Mil-mil!" Awww, that was just so cute! J'dee-sama, did you get the part that my 'friend' and me sent through her e-mail?
| Reviewed By: TRF-Chan On: November 02, 2003 14:51 CST
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Hey J'dee! I already sent you an e-mail about how I was glad you updated and all, and how today's my birthday, but I just thought I'd let you know I read it. Plus, you haven't gotten a review since June! Anywho, I like it ^.^ Seriousness isn't really my thing, but some of you guys can really pull it off nicely. And Marron's got kids! Kawaii! Wonder how Juunana will react? Oh wait, he's my fic hubby, I know! *Cackles evilly* See ya later! ~TRF
| Reviewed By: Maria S. On: June 17, 2003 01:17 CDT
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I love the story but whats ganna happen to Turless and Blight to be truthful I kinda like those two charactors so I hope they be given a second chance. | Reviewed By: Jesscheaux [MediaMiner Member] On: March 11, 2003 13:42 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dragon, Dragon, rock the Dragon! *ducks from the flying vegetables thrown at her by non-dubbies* SORRRYYYYY!!!! I like that song! You can hear Goku do a Kamehameha in it!
Greetings all, tis I Jesscheaux the newest authoress of "Kohitanga" I'd just like to say how happy I am to be here and a big thanks to J'dee for letting me in. YOU ROCK J'DEE!!! I'm also in DBZ Bootcamp as the Leader of Platoon Yamcha, whoo hoo, YAMMY BOY!!! Who is very hot, and I think Tien is hot too, even with the three eyes.
So anyway, I'm about to take over as Goku's wife because I made a wish. GOKU-KUN IS MINE ALL MINE!!! I hope you guys don't mind. But I want to kinda have him to myself for the next chapters because I have this whole thing planned.
Gohan, and Goten will not be affected, it'll just be that Chi-chi is out of the picture. (She's going to be married to Hercule HAR HAR HAR! She's the perfect mother for Videl! They're so much alike!)
BANANA GIRL!!!!!!! I know you're out there! And I know you have a house full of Vegetas all to yourself! Well, a Capsule Corp full, and how will we tell which is the real Vegeta? So, BG, like e-mail me because I want to do a piece with you because you're really cool and also a Vegeta fan and even though I'm a Vegeta AND Kakarott fan, I want to borrow some of those Vegetas of yours *grin grin* Hehehe...
GUYS GUYS E-MAIL ME!!! *knows she sound hyper* I can be reached at "purpleEclipse22@yahoo.com" so if anyone wants a co-write or anything let me know, especially BG, we could have some adventures and of course bring Quorky, he's so funny even though he likes that skank Bulma. *holds up a sign that reads 'DEATH TO BULMA'* *coughs* no offense to Bulma fans.
Ooh, I have AIM too so IM me at 'camoCajun' and call me Jess, I know Jesscheaux is hard to say. Its pronounced "Jeh-shay"
SO J'DEE YOU ROCK THE PLANET!!! I loved the whole mirai thing and WHOOOOO GO GURL!!! You got Goten! He's so cute like his father *sighs* I love how he talks on that cell phone all the time. Say whatever happened to Kakuna? I always did like her and Trunks together *sniffly sniff* and where is Piccoloz Girl 01? I wanna see how her kids are doing.
Getting into the swing of things here, peeps. This is superDBZobsessed Jesscheaux signing off.
*salutes* | Reviewed By: Rainesama On: January 30, 2003 21:42 CST
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LOL! Funny post BG! But I've got a challenge for you: I dare you to write a Veggie fic with you in it. Y'know, one of those B/V fics where the girl gets abducted and becomes Veggie's little servant. @.@ What is with my obsession with the whole bondage/servititude thing? ...Ugh, I'm a hentai. Anyway, the *major* challenge is not being obsessed with Vegeta. You gotta act like you're disgusted with him! Lemme know whatcha think! | Reviewed By: stina-chan On: January 20, 2003 19:54 CST
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yello
yea i haven't written a part in a while but it wasn't my fault *throws hands up in fear, lowers them when nobody attacks*
school has been hell my computer crashed for a while and then finals began...so ive been very busy, i'll try to get a part in soon though so dun worry *waves*
stina-chan | Reviewed By: Saiyan Princess TRF On: December 20, 2002 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Woooah! Things are gettin'interesting! I was planning to do a "time travel" thing, but now you've done it.
Heero: *rolls his eyes* But she's thought of a loophole, of course.
Yep! I'm still going to try for a time travel thing!
Heero: And of course her loophole is full of crazy twists and turns that no one will buy.
SHUT UP HEE-MAN! I have the right to exercise my creative license!
Heero: Do you mean "exercise" or "go insane with"?
Actually, either one would work quite nicely. By the way, great pieces everyone, and a merry Christmas/Hannukah/Kwanza/significant other celebration that takes place in late December. | Reviewed By: M.Q. [MediaMiner Member] On: December 19, 2002 18:16 CST
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HEYLO!!!
YEAH, YOU UPDATED!!! OH JOY!!! *Starts to cry* I want a Vegeta, WHAAAAAAAA!!!! *Stops crying* Ahh...me sa got an idea...this is where author powers come in handy...*laughs evily* Well, I luved the chappies, great job pplz!!! I've been busy too, I had semester finals today, and tomorrow...Oh well...C YAZ!!! | Reviewed By: DA On: December 16, 2002 21:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Okay, J'dee, you MUST send me an e-mail to let me know when you've updated!! That way I don't fall behind!!
This is to everyone: NICE WORK!! I loved it! You guys did a wonderful job!! I cant wait to see what happens next!! Keep it up. | Reviewed By: Dark-Angel On: November 06, 2002 15:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU GUYS SUCK!! Its not far!! your toooooo talented! havent you ever heard of sharing the wealth?!?!?!?!? Im jk!
I love the chapter, and I cant believe I finally caught up!!
Familiar: yah, its about time!
Shut up! Ive been really really really busy! but anyways, everyone keep up the amazing work! Until next time! Bye! | Reviewed By: BananaGirl On: November 03, 2002 14:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WHAT? How can Trey not like bananas? Is he wierd??!! EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEP!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Anywho,I'ma write me next piece now. Bye! | Reviewed By: BananaGirl On: October 25, 2002 07:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This must be my first review for at least a couple of chapters. Soz, but reviewing is so time-consuming!
Quorky: Why is it? I do most of the work!
Shush, muse monkey. Jeril, dude, would I steal teenage Skittles from you?
Quorky: Yes
OK, in normal circumstances I would, but I AM going to seduce Skittles this time around!
Quorky: Unless I change my mind. I am, afterall, your muse. I suggest you praise and shower me with gifts.
O.o Evil, blackmailing monkey
Quorky: Or an alternative plot is that you could fall in love with Dende and follow him around.
DENDE?!
Quorky: Hey, it could happen.
*Brings Quorky some bananas* Would you like them peeling, oh intelligent muse?
Quorky: I suppose you could.
*Brings palm tree leaf and fans Quorky* | Reviewed By: sHiNiGaMi On: October 25, 2002 04:52 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Mwahahhaahha! Good piece!! | Reviewed By: Jeril Dragonsoul On: October 24, 2002 21:14 CDT
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*throws back her head and laughs insanely* I have a PAR-TAY GOING ON!!! HELL YUS!! Go me!! Wooohoo!! :P This is gonna be fun!! And Adult Veggie will meet with Teen Veggie!! O.o;;!! This'll be lotsa, lotsa fun!!!! *dances around happily* Kami, I'm soooooo hyper and happy and oh Dende I can't wait, can't wait, can't wait!!! *dances even more*
Keep writing everyone!! It's all great!! Keep up the good work!!! *dances* I can't keep control!! *dance, dance, dance*
Smiles everyone!!!
*Jeril Dragonsoul | Reviewed By: stina-chan On: October 23, 2002 14:22 CDT
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hey yo,
now i really can take a kitten off your hands....
if you give me a kitten i'll name it bagira....cliche but oh so shibby.....
mmmm......peachy goodness.... dripping down my chin....
*wipe*
that was wierd....
stina-chan, keep writing parts everyone | | Pages (3): [ « < 1 2 3 > » ] |
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