| "Trinity" Reviews/Comments [ 100 ] |
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Reviewed By: Miyanon On: July 27, 2003 23:48 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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You are a genius. I've never laughed so hard in my life. My mom was even looking at me funny. Unfortunately that made me laugh even harder.
Thank you. |
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2003 19:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ok, I know I've already reviewed for this chapter SIX VERY LONG DAYS ago, but hey, did I stress the 'very long' part? OMG! I lost count of how many times I've re-read this chapter in six days, so I decided to review it AGAIN! I check this story EVERYDAY to see if it's been updated! No, not because I'm a freak (which I am ;) ), but because this is one of my most absolute and positively utmost favorite G/V yaoi fanfiction of all time! Please, please, PLEASE don't keep us in suspense for three more months, I don't think my poor heart, or libido, could handle much more! =)))
LOOKING FORWARD TO MORE LEMONS LIKE THAT! YEAH! THAT is how a lemon should be written! =)
HOT HOT HOT HOT! *Plyric* runs to bathroom and turns on cold shower... ;) |
Reviewed By: delihn64 On: July 21, 2003 19:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fantastic. This is one of the best stories I have ever read. I was worried that you wouldn't continue, but the wait was totally worth it. I love the conection between Goku, Vegeta, and Vegiito. The reasoning behind the way they behave is believable and it adds so much richness to the story. I do hope you continue. |
Reviewed By: Myself On: July 21, 2003 19:34 CDT
Comment/Review:
O.O
What is Vegeta going to do?! How suspensful...
You must update soon! |
Reviewed By: MajinoujiVegeta [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 14:22 CDT
Comment/Review:
You have no idea have freakin long ive waited to read more of this fic, i was hooked immediatly and often wondered when you would update, now i am very pleased and shall enjoy this moment.... |
Reviewed By: DB yaoi addict On: July 21, 2003 12:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm a complete fan of all your stuff. But oooooooh, don't torture me with these cliffhanger endings 'cos now I probably have to wait a couple of months for ch. 7!
Lotsa lemon, please, IMHO there can never be too much lemon... |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: July 21, 2003 02:10 CDT
Comment/Review:
*screams and glomps you*
Well its about damn time you updated! And with Lemon no less!!! Good gravy was that was AWESOME *fans herself*
I love how you write everyone's interaction.... Like Piccolo and Vegeta for example; they may hate each other, but they UNDERSTAND each other at the same time....
And Goku and Vejitto flirting.... and the lemon scene.... omgomgomg.... *takes a deep breath* Sorry, don't mean to sound like a hyperactive teenager or anything ^_^ Its just that that lemon was friggin GREAT...
oh, btw, loved the last line "The prince of darkness was not amused".... hehe
perfect cliffy ending!
Hurry up and write the next chapter, pretty please!! You know you want to Xero... *nudge nudge* |
Reviewed By: Kurayami-sama On: July 20, 2003 22:27 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Vegitto is so...going to get his ass kicked.
This chapter was awesome and I love it I can't
wait when you update this again so that I can
read the next chapter.
Owari~ |
Reviewed By: Plyric [MediaMiner Member] On: July 20, 2003 18:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Brilliant! Absolutely Brilliant!
I have this huge smile PLASTERED on my face! My heart's still beating from that love-making scene, and then the ending! WOW! I CANNOT WAIT to see what happens in the next chapter with Vegeta's explosion! Goodness, I'll have to re-read that chapter a million and one more times than I've already re-read Chapter 4! Please update seriously soon, and I mean like light-speed soon! =))) |
Reviewed By: Sinu-Yasha On: July 20, 2003 17:58 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love it update soon. |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 15, 2003 16:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
well, Goku. after the way she was acting in the lab; I'd be scared of ChiChi, too. the woman is insane. makes me wonder if she'd ever really hurt those kids. humn... |
Reviewed By: Christina G. wytygr74@hotmail.com On: June 15, 2003 15:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh, how i's love to see ChiChi suddenly blowup. she'll scream so loud she goes KAAABBOOOOMMMM!
woul;dn't that be great? |
Reviewed By: phantomscribe72 On: June 02, 2003 20:14 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I know I've said it before, but I'll say it again...
I'm not the biggest yaoi fan in the world... but I am one of your biggest fans. You have a rare gift. Thank you for sharing it with us. |
Reviewed By: Miyanon On: May 31, 2003 12:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ha! I love Vegeta when he's in a jealous and possesive rage. I don't know why but it's very cute. You have a very great story here. Although I do rememeber someone needing to spork you to update it. Well, if that's what it takes to get the next chapter up soon I will! |
Reviewed By: Miyanon On: April 19, 2003 00:36 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This story... is so incredibly cool! It's one of the most original yaoi fics I've seen so far! And I just love Vejitto's uh.... "reasoning" powers.
Oh and by the way, ChiChi is insane. *nods* Yup. Completely and utterly insane. I hope she gets sent to a mental asylum or something. Self-combustion actually doesn't sound like a bad thing.
Ohh. And Vegeta's really pissed off now... How is this going to affect everything? And how can Vejitto have both of them at once unless they fuse into Gogeta? .....Wow, half an hour, that's not really a lot of time.
Anyway, again, this story is so cool. And I hope you update this really soon.... Either that or I will resort to threatening you with sporks. |
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