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| "Ascend from the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: LoVE-hATE reLatiOnshIp On: November 21, 2002 04:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUGOIIIII Fanfic~~~~~~!!!!!!! CoME on!! Continue!!
I need LEMON right now!! Hehe!! | Reviewed By: Yumei Kuroyama On: December 01, 2002 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^; You write wonderfully and your mistakes are very few. Just one or two grammatical mistakes in what I've read so far, but overall it was wonderful, very enjoyable, and well written. The plot is rather suspenseful and I'm sure you'll develop it well as well. Good work and update again soon! ^_^
~Yumei | Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: October 20, 2002 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KKKKYAAAHHHHHH,...*blink,blink*...you stop THEREEEEEEEE?????...*pout*....Haaaaiiiiaayyyahhhhhhh,....you're SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CCRUEELLLLLLL,...*stomp foot*...and here i thought we're FINAAALYYYYY gona get to hear those two MMOOAANNNNNNN and SSCCREAMMMMMMMMM,...*hentai grins*...Ahhheemmm,...AnnnyyyyyWaaaayyyyyy,...just make sure ya gona continue this soon kay,...can't wait to know what happen next,...*evil grins*...and make sure the lemon scene is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO HHHHHOOOTTTT,...that the whole of meifu gona feel the heat,...*snicker*...all in all,..i'm glad that ya gona continue yer-fic here,...i'm sure alot of fans of NC.17 ratings have move here,...after what FANFIC.NET has done,...*pout somemore*...all in all,...a VERRYYYYYY well done thuzuki+hisoka romance fic,...and i LOVVVEEEEEEEEE it,..*grins*....continue soon,..till next chapter,..JAAAAAAAAA and GAANBBATEEEEE-NEEEE!!^_~!! | Reviewed By: Pixie252 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far! Your interaction between Hisoka and Tsuzuki is very real and the characters are all in character. Your writing style is descriptive and this story is very well done. Please, continue this! | Reviewed By: Elf Asato On: October 14, 2002 11:00 CDT
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I love it I love it I love it I love it!!!!!!!!!!
I had this fic on my "fics to watch for more parts" list, but I think somehow it escaped me...but I'm happy I got to read more of it! Ooh! Please continue it~! | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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