| "Ascend from the Darkness" Reviews/Comments [ 20 ] |
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Reviewed By: selena281 On: June 18, 2003 20:24 CDT
Comment/Review:
I think you have a wonderful plot developing here!
I can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: February 17, 2003 08:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YYYYYYYeeessssss,...Youuuuuu FFFFiinaaallyyyyyyy UUUppppdaaatedddddd,....the plot thickens and things're getting more intresting than before,....*grins*...i bet when thuzuki and hisoka FFFFiinnaaalllyyyyyyy manage to Geeeetttt Itttttt Onnnnn,...*hentai grins*,...iy's gona be OOOnnneeeeee HHHHeeeellllllll of a VVVVVeerrryyyyyyyyy SSteeaaammyyyyyyy and HHHHHooooooottttttt LLeeemmonnnnnnn scenes Neeeee????...*lickin lips*....hope soo,...with thuzuki bein sexualy frustrated with hisoka,...things bound to get quite "spicy" Neee,...*giggles*.....all in all,..hope ya gona continue soon,..and keep-up the good work too,...till next chapter,...JJJaaaaaaaaaaaaaa and GGGaaaaanbbbaaateeeeee-Neeeeee!!^.~!! |
Reviewed By: Imbrii On: February 09, 2003 02:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
wow.... No, really, WOW.
This is definately one of my faves now. It's just..
DAAAAMN
I love it. Love every single bit of it, and I will sit in the corner drooling until you release another chapter. I'm so envious of your talent! Beautiful, hope you write many fics! |
Reviewed By: Karen On: February 09, 2003 22:15 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Fanfiction Peice = Awesome, there I explained well anyway you have great writing talents. I absolutely loved and adored this peice of fanfiction. =^.^= Forgive me for being so blunt but Hisoka had better get with Tsuzuki or I'll go crazy! Its great and quickly, type, type quickly, very very quickly. ^^ |
Reviewed By: Requiem Duindain [MediaMiner Member] On: February 14, 2003 20:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god!!! I wait for months on end and still only get 1 chapter in return!? Hehehe, kidding... Anyway, it's still good but it's so hanging!!!! Please hurry up! |
Reviewed By: Merigold (Kelly) On: February 06, 2003 23:02 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Eeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee! Nagi updated! *GLOMP!* |
Reviewed By: ChibiChanLain [MediaMiner Member] On: January 30, 2003 16:15 CST
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Shiroki On: June 02, 2003 01:16 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
you stopped *there*? *whines* but yeah, cool to know Hisoka's close enough to Tsuzuki to be able to trace him... now i'm left hanging off the edge of my seat trying to figure out what happens next... hoping and waiting, patiently da yo~ ganbatte ^^ thanks for a nice 6 chapters! |
Reviewed By: ChibiChanLain [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 12:48 CST
Comment/Review:
CONTINUE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I've been dying to see more! I still have your fic on my website (www.geocities.com/almighty_chibi_chan/enter_page.html) and I want to see more! Please update |
Reviewed By: CaS On: November 21, 2002 04:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
WoAaa!!! You stop now ??! On chap 5 ??! On da most exciting parts??! *pouts*
Come on.... Continue this!!!!!!!!! I really do luv your fic!!!! You really can write some romance between this two shinigami!!
Demo.. Tsuzuki will the seme[da more dependent..] right?? and Hisoka will be the uke?? NE? NE? |
Reviewed By: LoVE-hATE reLatiOnshIp On: November 21, 2002 04:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
SUGOIIIII Fanfic~~~~~~!!!!!!! CoME on!! Continue!!
I need LEMON right now!! Hehe!! |
Reviewed By: Yumei Kuroyama On: December 01, 2002 19:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
^^; You write wonderfully and your mistakes are very few. Just one or two grammatical mistakes in what I've read so far, but overall it was wonderful, very enjoyable, and well written. The plot is rather suspenseful and I'm sure you'll develop it well as well. Good work and update again soon! ^_^
~Yumei |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: October 20, 2002 09:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
KKKKYAAAHHHHHH,...*blink,blink*...you stop THEREEEEEEEE?????...*pout*....Haaaaiiiiaayyyahhhhhhh,....you're SOOOOOOOOOOOOOO CCRUEELLLLLLL,...*stomp foot*...and here i thought we're FINAAALYYYYY gona get to hear those two MMOOAANNNNNNN and SSCCREAMMMMMMMMM,...*hentai grins*...Ahhheemmm,...AnnnyyyyyWaaaayyyyyy,...just make sure ya gona continue this soon kay,...can't wait to know what happen next,...*evil grins*...and make sure the lemon scene is SOOOOOOOOOOOOO HHHHHOOOTTTT,...that the whole of meifu gona feel the heat,...*snicker*...all in all,..i'm glad that ya gona continue yer-fic here,...i'm sure alot of fans of NC.17 ratings have move here,...after what FANFIC.NET has done,...*pout somemore*...all in all,...a VERRYYYYYY well done thuzuki+hisoka romance fic,...and i LOVVVEEEEEEEEE it,..*grins*....continue soon,..till next chapter,..JAAAAAAAAA and GAANBBATEEEEE-NEEEE!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: Pixie252 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2002 09:17 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like this so far! Your interaction between Hisoka and Tsuzuki is very real and the characters are all in character. Your writing style is descriptive and this story is very well done. Please, continue this! |
Reviewed By: Elf Asato On: October 14, 2002 11:00 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love it I love it I love it I love it!!!!!!!!!!
I had this fic on my "fics to watch for more parts" list, but I think somehow it escaped me...but I'm happy I got to read more of it! Ooh! Please continue it~! |
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