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Reviewed By: Warrior Goddess of Insanity On: October 20, 2002 23:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!!!!!!!!! That was ssssssoooooo Great!!!! Why the Hell didn't i read this when it was on FF.Net!!??!! I love it when the fuck Yama and screw up his mind!! It makes him so damn angsty! Now I have to wait for you to post the next chapter *cries* It's not Fair!!!! Don't make us wait to long!!!!
-Me
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Reviewed By: Kinu-uni [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 18:30 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I didn't like this story at first, but then I drew a scene from it and I absolutely fell in love! Matt and Ken together are kind of intriguing. Plus Matt is just begging to be written as evil *goes hentai... Anyway* The only thing I still don't like, and that will probably never change, is: YOU KILLED MY TOSHIKI!!! Okay granted if he absolutely had to go that would have been the way... But still... |
Reviewed By: Felina On: October 17, 2002 12:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I'm so glad that you've found a home for your NC-17s ::beams:: I'm sorry that you're not getting many reviews for your wonderful stories, they deserve more attention than that. So I thought I'd review again for this one! I love the way you characterize Matt; yes I know everyone makes him angsty, but I think your portrayal is unique nevertheless. Keep posting the chapters up--I read this a while ago, but I can't remember what happened! ::sobsob::
PS: By the by, on the ratings.... I only gave the enjoyment level a 9 'cos I never read the lemon parts ::pulls a face:: A great story anyways! |
Reviewed By: Rashika Star [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 15:12 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
What is wrong with everyone?!?! *looks around* Man. I still love this fic... ^_^ mm..sexy Matt& Ken....and Tai... I know you ranted about the others who asked about Toshiki's Secret..but... I think you should get the other ones up first and fast..that way I can reread them and then you can post Toshiki's fic. ^_^ *runs away as you glare at her* hee.... |
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