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Reviewed By: juls On: August 09, 2005 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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this is great!!!! Please Ken must stay with yama!! Or maybe that something happens between dai an yama!!! Please update!!!!
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Reviewed By: Nobodynow On: April 01, 2005 19:59 CST
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It seems that Yama is more caring than Ken, poor Daisuke! Always on the bottem. Love the story update soon!
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Reviewed By: cutielishuz [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2004 23:26 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
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I absolutely love chapter seven. Especially the part where Daisuke says any pain would be okay as long as Ken cries out his name. It made me cry..*gets teary again* So*wailing*SAAADDD! Btw, I have some ideas for chapter eight like how about focusing on Ken or Daisuke about how they felt about the whole threesome thing. Maybe another lemon.*shrugs* Like in the beginning, you can focus on their feelings just like how you focused on Daisuke's feelings in the other chapters. Hope this helps!
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Reviewed By: sentay On: July 27, 2004 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh my god! i'm sooo glad you updated this! i read it a loooong time ago, but thoguht you had ditched it. please continue soon! your idea rocks! you rock! Laterz ~st
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Reviewed By: Jann On: July 26, 2004 00:58 CDT
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I've really enjoyed reading this fic up to now--I'd actually thought you'd completely abandonned it, so I was very happily surprised to see chapter 7 up! As to what would happen next... I don't know! I really feel for poor Daisuke, who doesn't seem to be getting the loving he needs, and is still nursing a pretty unhealthy obsession. I kind of see Ken as a bit of a jerk--a very sexy jerk, but still a jerk--because I imagine him KNOWING just what's going on with Daisuke. I hope Daisuke will continue to love Ken, but maybe somehow come to the realization that what he's doing could really hurt himself. :O (I am a big sap.)
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Reviewed By: Kaiwaii cute On: July 11, 2004 07:30 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You wrote the threesome perfectly, out of all the threesome fics I've read this is the best so don't worry about it not being good because it was exceptional! As to where the story goes I think that Daisuke should fight to have Ken to himself, as that I seems like the way to go, or maybe Yamato decides he doesn't want to share? But Ken likes it. Yamato wants to get with Tai? So maybe while he is with Ken he can pursue Tai, while Daisuke is trying to get Ken all to himself. Just an idea, but I'm sure with some time you can come up with a better one! You are an extremely talented author (one of me favourites!) your stories are really good, please continue this story as soon as you can, I'll be waiting with baited breath!
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Title: grrrrrrr
Reviewed By: Burned Vamp [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 02:18 CDT
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Kama Sutra with Yama... Yama Sutra ^.^ Now... Tai realizes that he actually wants yama and not some female bimbo and decides to take matters into his OWN hands and out of kens... leaving daisuke to pick up right where yama left off... ^.^
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Title: Moi again
Reviewed By: Burned Vamp [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 02:17 CDT
Comment/Review:
STUPID THING DIDN'T DO MY WHOLE REVIEW!!! "
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Title: Moi
Reviewed By: Burned Vamp [MediaMiner Member] On: July 11, 2004 02:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
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Reviewed By: Unknown........... On: July 08, 2004 13:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic but You have to update soon ! I'm dying to find out what happens next . I hope you are going to put a threesome ......
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Reviewed By: firedryad [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2003 22:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
beautifully written, thats an awesome fic u got there... update it soon! kuku... are we gonna get more of the kaiser soon? oo i cant wait to see where this fic goes. the plot is beautiful^^ along with everything else
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Reviewed By: ruddykitty [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2003 02:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I can't wait to see this finished! PLEASE THREESOME!
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Reviewed By: Carine^^ On: October 25, 2003 06:20 CDT
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Well, a Kensuke and Taito ending? Hey it's you who propose the Taito in your comment, and you know I'm a Taito lover ^^;; Carine^^
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Reviewed By: melimsah [MediaMiner Member] On: October 24, 2003 19:35 CDT
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Holy, shit... you'd better have the next one up soon!
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Reviewed By: wormmonsoulonfire [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2003 10:30 CDT
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Your great reviews keep me alive and focused on the story! I'm seriously working into making it a threesome, I just need to figure everything out! There will be one more chapter, then threesome, but the end.. is difficult.
Yamaken? Kensuke? Taito? Yamasuke? something else? -_-;;; |
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