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| "The Cruelty and Fairness of Fate" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: elspethsheyna [MediaMiner Member] On: October 19, 2002 05:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love this fic! It's got an original story line and makes for an enjoyable read. I really hope you update soon! Ja ne! | Reviewed By: moosebreath On: October 14, 2002 15:08 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It would not be fair to rate Style, S&G, or Originality
as 1)& 2)I am stuck with a 640x480 monitor and can't really
"see" the text (the table format forces at least a 600 to 768
width) well enough to judge; and 3) I haven't read enough Sailor
Moon stories to get a feel for any cliche'd elements (I don't know
what a "miko" is, etc.).
With that out of the way, I love this story. I want to see more.
I have only seen the American translation of the anime and read a few
fanfictions, but everybody seem relatively in-character for 3 years of
growth and this is would be a logical extention from what reviews I have read
of other episodes and writings. | | Pages (2): [ « < 1 2 ] |
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