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| "Mating Season" Reviews/Comments [ 34 ] | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] | Reviewed By: Lita On: October 13, 2002 23:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter I have been waiting for it for a while now I am glad you posted it. I do hope Hery and Rika find Renamon soon before something unforgivable happens. Post soon please!!!!! :) | Reviewed By: Tigra and Black Stormmon On: October 13, 2002 21:02 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hello, my friend. I'm glad you disided to post here. FFN is being really sucky lately. -_-* Good story (no suprise there though). Plese contuine to keep me posted. I really like your work.
I didn't really like the parts with Lee's dad though.
Anyway, keep posting!
Tigra
& Black Stormmon | Reviewed By: The Informer On: October 12, 2002 23:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, Jinako-chan--
Its Kiiroiishi... O_o
Dex--
Did ff.net kick you off? That's messed up...
See ya! | Reviewed By: Jinako-chan On: October 12, 2002 14:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Finally, more Mating Season! Once again, another great chapter. I really loved the Ryojuri parts and learning about Ryo's past, it was very touching. I'm looking foward to seeing Ruki, Jen and the others in the Digital World. I also loved seeing Hirokazu's rebellion against his parents -- it would be great if he got a boyfriend just to piss them off. Just one question, when did Terriermon fall for Rena, out of curiosity? Karen is cool...and I'm not sure why I just pictured her and Alice as friends. 0_o That was weird. As for the story spreading out over a few months, it's kind of a new idea, but I can adjust. I think it improves the story if that makes any sense. ^^;;
You could always name Rena and Lee's kid Kiiroishi. =P No, seriously, I think Kitsune would work out okay. As for Ruki and Takato's, I want to say Hikaru, just because it's a name for either gender and we don't know what their kid will be. Gah, you didn't ask for suggestions, though, did you? Sorry then. Keep it up, of course. ^_^ | | Pages (3): [ « ‹ 1 2 3 ] |
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