| "Outlaw Star; The Ryunoken Sword(revised, rededited, and better than ever)" Reviews/Comments [ 27 ] |
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Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: April 01, 2003 18:43 CST
Comment/Review:
Hey are you going to add another chapter soon? U really like this story and hope you add another few chapters. Just want to read.
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Reviewed By: Sarge On: March 24, 2003 21:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is one helluva fic! I read the first 13 chapters when you put them on ff.net but only recently found out that it was located at this site when I read your review of 'Possession.' This is in my opinion, one of the best and also one of the most well-thought-out Outlaw Star stories out there, thus the high ratings. Your story is highly engrossing and I just can't wait to read more! You've got an amazing talent for writing. Even though I'm more of an A/J fan than a G/M fan, this is by far one of my favorite Outlaw Star fics. Keep up the fantastic work!!
ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Valcrist God of protection [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 21:07 CST
Comment/Review:
Very very very cool. Great story and a very good style of writing. Just keep doing what you're doing.
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Reviewed By: Ti'ana On: December 19, 2002 21:43 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YESYESYES!! I finished reading it and it's awesome!! I'm not sure which name I used when I first reviewed your story, (Rindi/Ti'ana) so I used this one. I just realized today that I hadn't read Chapter 14 yet, but let me tell you. Both chapters are Excellent work; exactly what I always know will come from you.
Ja! |
Reviewed By: darei On: November 28, 2002 16:14 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, I read your chapter 14! Sooooo cool! I...must...read...more... I can't believe you're just making all this up as you go along! What a friggin' good imagination you got man! |
Reviewed By: Angel_Wings On: November 25, 2002 08:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was awesome in chapter 14! I was wanting to throw something at the computer when I read the last few sentences. My roommate thought I went nuts! LOL! Anyway I can't wait to see the conversation between Mel & Gene! Hurry up & get that next chapter up & soon! |
Reviewed By: sstarmonkeyman On: November 22, 2002 18:47 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Dear Ronin,
Congratulations on another successful chapter of "The Ryunoken Sword." The style and use of specifics were top notch. Continue with the good work! |
Reviewed By: darei On: November 20, 2002 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One thing...wow. That was incredible. Though it was long, it was very satisfying. I love the fight scenes, they are so realistic...and the martial arts techniques. This is totally like a real continuation of the series Outlaw Star. I'm thinking you're continuing this story because it is so damn awesome!!! |
Reviewed By: darei On: November 20, 2002 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
One thing...wow. That was incredible. Though it was long, it was very satisfying. I love the fight scenes, they are so realistic...and the martial arts techniques. This is totally like a real continuation of the series Outlaw Star. I'm thinking you're continuing this story because it is so damn awesome!!! |
Reviewed By: Raziel On: October 30, 2002 19:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey, great job, I haven't read a fanfic this good in a long time. Outlaw Star is one of my favorite animes and you kept the story flowing brillantly. I can't wait to see the conclution. You should seriously consider sending this to Sunrise or Bandai or whoever, this would definatly make on awsome show. |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 13, 2002 17:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like how you're story is starting off. Please write some more? |
Reviewed By: denimcat On: November 24, 2002 20:39 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey this is great! Oh please continue, I am loving the whole plot. I wonder when the crew is finally going to encounter the McDougal brothers... the plot thickens.... |
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