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| "Mortally Corrupted" Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: shi_tiger [MediaMiner Member] On: November 08, 2002 15:54 CST
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Interesting idea. I'm going to enjoy reading this one. More soon please! | Reviewed By: hawkband1 On: October 31, 2002 22:38 CST
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so cool, i can't wait to see more of this. | Reviewed By: hime no Recca On: October 24, 2002 20:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the better fics that i have read, that's fer sure. i hope you continue this as soon as you can. i wanna read more so you'd better do so. well written fic, i must say, but what i like best is how each character's presonality is like. jus' simply lovit man. this was just *too* good to be true. (grins) eva heard of that saying? (giggles). welp, gonna go now so this is goodbye. update really, really, *really* quickly ok?!!! i'll be sure to keep a look out for this fic, that's a promise. ^__^ | Reviewed By: chichiri maxwell On: October 17, 2002 19:04 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i really like where this fic is heading and i have a feeling that the friend of Lina's is really Duo/Shinigami ne??? hehehe. i totally enjoyed reading the first chapter and all so ya betta get the next part out coz i just totally cant wait to read it!!!!!!!!!! plus..... i just love to read torturing to all my fave characters (yea, i'm weird) so ya betta have alot of Duo-angst!!!!!!!!!! continue!!!!!!! | Reviewed By: Serene Jackson O'Neill [MediaMiner Member] On: October 15, 2002 19:53 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked the fic, but I think you got the translation of 'bitch' in japanese wrong. I was taught that bitch in japanese was ama. Well, i liked it though. Here's some japanese cuss words should you'd like to know them.
Ninmu Ryoukai--(You should know this!) Mission acknowledged
Ninmu Kanryou--(Another you should know!) Mission accomplished
Shinigami--The Death God...Duo often calls himself this ^_^;;
Baka--Idiot ^_^
Ojousan--Lady, Miss
-kun--An honorific usually used for younger boys
-sama--A polite honorific used for superiors
Tsuzuku--To be continued
Omae o korosu--(Duh :P) I'll kill you
Omake--Bonus, extra
JAPANESE INSULTS
1.Zakkenayo- Get out of my face
2.Uso yo- that's a lie
3.Onore- you dirty fuck
4.Nade kuso- what's this crap
5.kusottare- Stinking son of a bitch
6.Kono yogore- Worthless piece of shit
7.Kono yarou- You dumb idiot
8.Kono ama- You dirty slut
9.Ittai-dare/Nanda ka- Who/What the hairy heck is that
10.Inu- Dog
11.Bakayarou- Stupid, jerk, idiot, dumb, illegitimate son of a dirty street whore
12.Baka na- That's stupid
13.Bakamono- Stupid thing
14.Baka mitai- It must hurt to be that stupid
15.Baka- Stupid
16.Shine (shee-nay)- Die
17.Kusoatama- poop head
18.Kusu o taberu na- Eat crap
19.Ketsunoana- butthole
20.Kisama- King of jackasses
21.Ama- bitch
22.Urusai kono bakayarou- Shut up noisy idiot
23.Oni- Demon
24.Ookiosewada- Up yours
25.Inoshishi- Wild pig
26.Achike- Fuck off
27.Chikushoo- Oh fuck
28.Kuso- Shit
29.Ketsunoana- Asshole
30.Shimatta- Damn
31.Koitsu- That bastard
32.Omawarisan chikano tska-mate - Police! Arrest this pervert
33.Omae o korosu- I'm going to kill you
34.Cho-yabe - Shit, we blew it
I got these off a website. Maybe they'll help everyone learn japanese. Not. Anyway, hope you enjoy. Bye! | Reviewed By: jasmiaka [MediaMiner Member] On: October 14, 2002 21:11 CDT
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This is a great start. It's interesting. I'd like to see what happens next so...continue. | Reviewed By: sailor c. ryoko [MediaMiner Member] On: December 17, 2002 19:07 CST
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To all, but especially Angel17:
I know I'd said that I was going to get the next chapter out during Thanksgiving vacation and I really was too. But the disk I had saved the next chapter on somehow got friggin' messed up and I couldnt fuckin' open it. Trust me, I'm just as pissed as you guys are and still am too. I'd already finished the chapter with 23 pages but the freakin' disk just *had* ta fuck up. It had said that I need to format the disk in order to open it, but if I format it, all of my information and whatever I have typed will totally be erased!! And all of that that I'd already typed, I am *not* going to erase it just like that. Plus, I had another fic typed on that disk and I had like 12-13 pages for that one so I am really, really pissed that the fuckin' disk did not open...... Again, please accept my apologies for not posting up the next chapter on Thanksgiving vacaton like promised. I'm still trying to open the fuckin' disk but I'm also typing the chapter over.
One thing that really pisses me off even more is the fact that for the second chapter of this fic, I really, *really* liked how the way I wrote the fic. The words and stuff and all y'know. And typing it over a second....I won't be typing exactly what I had typed the first time. Ooh!! Every time I think about that, I get even more pissed!!!!!..... ok. sorry for the outburst there. but everyone... (once again, 'specially Angel17) I'd say please give me to about the middle or maybe end of mext week to finish the next chapter please??? My Christmas vacation starts on Dec. 24. My last day of school is Dec. 23 and for the next couple of days, including next Monday and Tuesday, I have some big exams that are worth 3/4 of my grades. Man...if I dont pass 'em.....ouch. ::winces:: Please. And for the third time... I am *so* sorry minna. I really *really* am....
sailor c. ryoko | Reviewed By: Angel17 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 22:47 CST
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You haven't updated in so long your killing me. PLEASE UPDATE SOON. | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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