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| "Happy Birthday, Baby" Reviews/Comments [ 29 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: faye_valentine28 [MediaMiner Member] On: May 09, 2003 22:31 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 3 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 4 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 5 of 10
Overall Rating: 5 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed your general idea and the concepts you tried to illustrate however I feel that they were not illustrated as well as they could have been. It seems that your style is all about long run-on sentences. For me, I get bored very quickly with this type of style. Although you did have tremendously descriptive words, the flow of thought is limited by your sentence structure and use of grammar. | Reviewed By: Candor On: May 09, 2003 01:08 CDT
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well, since so many people are looking for my email address...Here you go. But don't waste my time with petty threats or viruses. If you can't come up with anything creative or rational to say, please don't bother. Thanks.
sulia_bogard01@yahoo.com | Reviewed By: Candor On: May 09, 2003 01:03 CDT
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man, is everybody here dumb? Obviously none of you are in the WK fandom, cause then you would understand that there has YET to be a single IN CHARACTER Weiß lemon. Hence, how badly OOC this obviously had to be to repulse me so badly. It's sick that I had to spell this out for you people. Just goes to show the small mentality here. But then again, you wouldn't know any of that Kitty, seeing as what you enjoy is obviously hidiously OOC. Oh, honey...btw...quoting words like "koibito" does not make you sound cool, or cute, and your name makes me ill. Thanks. | Reviewed By: Enigma's Kitten [MediaMiner Member] On: May 08, 2003 19:15 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Candor, sweetheart, you are SO confused. This is a SAIYUKI fic, NOT a WK fic. Before you flame someone, get your facts straight.
And for the record, only a coward refuses to leave his or her email address.
*kisses her koibito the llama and toddles off* | Reviewed By: Candor On: May 03, 2003 21:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 1 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 1 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 1 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 1 of 10
Overall Rating: 1 of 10 Comment/Review:
This llama doesn't just spit...it sucks! I have no idea what you were trying to write here, but whatever it was, you missed that mark entirely. I have never read such an OOC fic, and I'm an avid Weiß reader! I sincerely suggest you put up another OOC warning on this, cause one just doesn't cut it. And honey, you don't write angst or fluff. You write comedy...and bad comedy at that. An enormous dick is the best thing you can come up with for why demons and humans shouldn't procreate?! Please tell me that was supposed to be some kind of sick joke. And you have destroyed my oppinion of Jeep. All I was hoping was for some poacher to come into your fic and shoot the fuckin' thing. I have never seen an animal so involved in a sex scene. It was like reading a bad Pokemon lemon. I'm officially scarred for life, and I'll be sending you my therapy bills. | Reviewed By: Himitsu On: February 10, 2003 10:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sniff... it's hard to find lemon that's sweet... one that i won't be ashamed of letting my friends read... sniff... and hakuryu's expression, when he (it) finds them in the act of making love, well, it's so kawai! where'd u get that?
i glanced many lemons which grate on my sensitivities, yours however, is pure music! Please! Do go on! Lemon or not, i'll read your stories! | Reviewed By: Tsunae On: December 23, 2002 17:15 CST
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I'm the type of person who usually just reads, not comments, but this fic deserves more reviews! @_@
I'm glad that you wrote this, since it seems like there's too much Sanzo/Hakkai out there for my liking. ^_^ Hoorah for 85! :D | Reviewed By: ¤Sha¤GojyoxCho¤Hakkai¤ [MediaMiner Member] On: December 14, 2002 13:30 CST
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What's up with you people!? Rating the fanfiction!? In my opinion, 10 out of 10 is not GOOD ENOUGH! I don't know what to say about this! I loved it! I laughed, I cried, I got my parents worried about me... But that is not the point. The point is that I really cannot say how much I loved this story. Gojyo and Hakkai are my absolute favorite couple and I just love reading and writing about them and I am pleased beyond words to find someone else who thinks so, too. You don't know how much I loved your story! I just got finished watching some episodes of Saiyuki and my friend called me up before and she was like,"PRINT ME A COPY OF THE FANFIC!!!" (and I swear that happened). So... as I write, I am listening to one of the Saiyuki soundtracks(Volume#2) and... GAH! I just wanted to say THANK YOU! You are a wonderful writter and you should continue on! Venture on! (To the west... :P) What's funny is that I have the Official Fan Book and Backgammon, also... ^_^ You rule the world of Saiyuki fanfics! ^^
Thank you SO much for writting this! It was sooooo sweet!
¤Sha¤GojyoxCho¤Hakkai¤
P.S.
Funny things again: It was uploaded on my actual Birthday! Ah, that's neat. I wrote some lemony fics on Gojyo and Hakkai's birthdays but they weren't nearly as good as this. ARIGATO!!! | Reviewed By: paxnirvana [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 22:24 CST
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I've recently discovered your selection of wonderful fic and I agree - lemons need love too! *snicker* Anyway, this is quite lovely and includes my favorite Saiyuki pair (okay, second-favorite, I'm most partial to Kenren x Tenpou).
Thank you for sharing such loving and caring friends who want to be more... very enjoyable!
Also, in case someone hasn't let you know by now, but, in response to your comment [5] in the notes, that Hakuryuu (Jeepu for the manga-freaks) is yet another character taken from the original legend of 'Journey to the West' - I think Jeepu in both incarnations is far more fun than a boring old white horse that gets to carry Sanzo Hoshi-sama on his back all the way to India... so it follows that the very elegant and reserved Goujun is his counterpart in heaven, being as he appears to be the same Dragon King of the Western Seas who was banished to earth for destroying his brother's sacred pearl and enchanted by Kanzeon Bosatsu to carry Sanzo on his journey... | Reviewed By: Akari On: November 18, 2002 11:03 CST
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*great big hugs*
Another excellent fic.Yummy Hakkai goodness.
Can't wait for more. | Reviewed By: Cacophony On: October 25, 2002 02:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, just plain wonderful. Enjoyed your fics on FFN; glad to see you continue!
I really like the lowercase style for quiet speech - you can hear the text whispering. And "baby", my absolute favorite endearment.
Sex and plot. Hot sex and sweet plot. And romantic. It is hot in here, or just me?
--Cacophony
p.s. more. More! MORE!
(apologies to Tom Lehrer, "Smut") | Reviewed By: K-Meyleon Sha [MediaMiner Member] On: October 23, 2002 00:17 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
I enjoyed reading this ficcie, really hot. Moist...
You're talented. Do more.. ^-^
to the other-->And yes, I am proud to love Gojyou-uke, forget the gun.(anyway,you were out of.. subject? let's just stop there.)
K-Meyleon S. | Reviewed By: Rubious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 18, 2002 16:07 CDT
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the intrusive boy calls. "I'm hungry.
It's been twenty since we ate lunch."
"BAKASARU!Leave me alone. I need my privacy," the monk growls before stalking off to the glade. | Reviewed By: Rubious [MediaMiner Member] On: October 17, 2002 05:01 CDT
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My opinion of the prior reviewer is Gojyo would never be uke unless Sanzo held a gun to his head.
"Kyu!" Hakuryuu agrees, Watching Sanzo stalk off to get some solitude. | Reviewed By: K-Meyleon Sha On: October 15, 2002 11:30 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
well, very explicit and well done!
But I prefer Gojyou-uke.. ;_; | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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