| "Consequences" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: WRITE MORE PPLZ On: October 25, 2002 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good but can you write it so I can see the ending of the line |
Reviewed By: write more On: October 25, 2002 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good but how come the end of the line can't be seen? |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good first chapter. It had a lot of action in it. That's what I really like in fanfics. Please continue!!!!! |
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