| "Consequences" Reviews/Comments [ 18 ] |
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Reviewed By: anabell On: December 19, 2003 20:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
i love ur story een though there were some missspelled words, but ut was all good
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Reviewed By: pingpong [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2003 08:50 CST
Comment/Review:
Well, its about time you updated! /looks at boiling water using the flames from her fics/ Tea? YPP- -_-U Tea at a time like this...
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Reviewed By: hteraj25@yahoo.com On: July 25, 2003 08:13 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU ,the author, Write more or i shall force you to! ..... If you are wondering how I have my ways... because this is the best friggin story that I've read ,in a while. |
Reviewed By: eclipse [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 18:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holyshit this is good, write more!!! |
Reviewed By: smiley On: January 25, 2003 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This a very good story sof far. Action and Romance. Very good. Please post a another chapter soon. :) |
Reviewed By: Dalero On: November 14, 2002 09:22 CST
Comment/Review:
interesting little story as well, I'll watch for it later and see it's conclusion :) |
Reviewed By: tsunami86tn On: November 13, 2002 19:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really enjoyed this fic because of the dramatic edge to it, but it still has some of the oroginal story line, but more so of the writer's own fantasy.
keep up the great story! ^-^ lookin' forward to the next part!! |
Reviewed By: Shadow~Magician [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 14:37 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow! this is an awesome story!!! The chapters are a bit long, but please keep writing! I cant wait until you add more! |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 02, 2002 09:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This fanfic just got better. You are really putting some good descriptive language in it. I recomned this to anyone who likes Action and romance. Please finish it!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Silver2039 [MediaMiner Member] On: October 27, 2002 15:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Really good fanfic keep writing. |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 07:31 CDT
Comment/Review:
I'll try to solve your problems as best as I can folks but I hope you try to bear with me ok? I'm not actually much of a computer whizz. |
Reviewed By: HI On: October 25, 2002 01:59 CDT
Comment/Review:
Hi this was very good can you write when the next chapter is coming out |
Reviewed By: WRITE MORE PPLZ On: October 25, 2002 01:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good but can you write it so I can see the ending of the line |
Reviewed By: write more On: October 25, 2002 01:55 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is good but how come the end of the line can't be seen? |
Reviewed By: yankeefan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 09:57 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was a really good first chapter. It had a lot of action in it. That's what I really like in fanfics. Please continue!!!!! |
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