| "My Fair Yami" Reviews/Comments [ 21 ] |
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Reviewed By: C.M Aeris [MediaMiner Member] On: April 17, 2003 13:45 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
CM:EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEKKKKKKK!!!!!
Bakura: (covering his ears) DAMRE!!!!!!!
CM: Shut up Kuro!
Bakura: (eyebrow twitchs) I told you to stop calling me that!!!
CM: :P! I loved the story! Keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: February 06, 2003 23:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I loved it. Ryou is so kawaii, and Yugi is so kawii.
Yami and Bakura: What about us?
Amethyst: You two are cute to, but in a different way then you aibou's. Sorry ^_^
Yami and Bakura: As long as we are still cute. ^_^ * Yami runs off to duel Kaiba and Bakura runs off to try and blow up my writers block with an insane look on his face * ^____^
Ryou: You trust him? With destructive materials?
Amethyst: Well no one else seems to be able to get rid of it. Well anyway that was a great story and I’ll be sure to be reading lots more of your stories.
Ryou: But I got hurt. ;_;
Amethyst: Don’t cry Ryou-chan. It makes me sad to see you cry. * Huggles Ryou who stops crying * Besides she had Bakura fix you up just like new. ^_^ Well I got to go, but the story was really great. ^_^ Well, bye byez. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: leev [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 00:59 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Good job Sam. I gotta tell ya, you should do an entire fic of nothing but ranting with the cast. Your author's notes are a riot. Did I spell that right? Hard to tell as I am wiping the chocolate milk off the monitor. Congrats! I laughed so hard it went up my nose.
I am so into the sequel. Will you be going over the identity of the mystery monster? |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 15, 2003 14:19 CST
Comment/Review:
Interesting ending (and by ending I mean Ch. 5 & the epilogue). Bakura all softened. Ryou and YamiYugi talk.
Very nicely written. Speaking of Bakura dying; you've made me think. Could he even really die? I mean, what's to stop him from disappearing into his soul room as the last moment? *shrugs* I just think too much sometimes. ^-^; |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: January 13, 2003 23:51 CST
Comment/Review:
OMG YOU KILLED HIM!!! T_T THAT IS SOOOOOO SAD!!! It was just getting happy again too! ^_^ Anyway Awesome fic! Loved it! Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Dark Lady Setsuna [MediaMiner Member] On: January 04, 2003 18:45 CST
Comment/Review:
~_~ damn... write more!! i really wanna see what happens!! |
Reviewed By: Shorty* On: January 03, 2003 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Wow. This is written wonderfully. So realistic. The concept is new to me, so it's refreshing as well. I eagerly await the conclusion. It seems to me that Yugi has melted Bakura a bit. The Ryou/YamiYugi soul room scene was great. |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: November 02, 2002 12:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Hey it's me again. This chapter was really good and I can't wait foe the next one. I'm really glag that Yugi/Ryou didn't get die or get raped. ^_^ Poor Ryou he thinks that Yugi is dead. -_-, * Hits Bakura *_* * Don't ever hurt Yugi or Ryou again, it's not nice. * Gives thumbs up to Madyamisam * This story is awsome so far, good luck with the rest. |
Reviewed By: Taure [MediaMiner Member] On: October 28, 2002 20:57 CST
Comment/Review:
Yeah, I've already had a comment, but hey, new chapter. Poor Yugi *the real one!* At least Ryou finally caught a break. I love your story, just added you to my favorite authors list! Yay, can't wait for the next update! |
Reviewed By: Tsuki_Chan [MediaMiner Member] On: October 26, 2002 19:29 CDT
Comment/Review:
Waaaaaaah!!! ;-; Poor Yugi!!!*Huggles Yugi* I like this ficcy even though Yugi's getting hurt...I gotta admitt, it's neat. I have one more ficcy of yours to read! ^o^ Write more to this and your first ficcy!!! ^_~ |
Reviewed By: Madyamisam [MediaMiner Member] On: October 25, 2002 06:53 CDT
Comment/Review:
*crying* OH GOD I'M SO SORRY!!!! There was a glitch in the programme and I had to take it off. Evidently any reviews that were there earlier have been unintentially wiped out.
I do appreciate all your reviews especially since all my 2 other fics are turning out to be a couple of flops.
And I'll put a new chappie up as soon as I can. Which is cool because now I'm on a half term break. Luv you all. Ja.
Madyamisam |
Reviewed By: Amethyst On: October 24, 2002 21:47 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is me second review for this story, but the first one isn't there anymore ( I was the first one to review your story. ^_^ ). So this is for both chapters, K. This is so sad and so good. Poor Yugi and still it's a yay for Ryou. Which is kind of confusing. I hope Yugi doesn't get hurt to much, that just wouldn't be write. Don't get me wrong it's not write when Ryou is getting to crap beaten out of him and Ryou is my favorite character to, so please be nice to both of them. But you left me hanging now I have to wait till you write the next chapter. Please get it up soon, pretty, pretty please with sugar on top.
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Reviewed By: Achika On: October 24, 2002 15:21 CDT
Comment/Review:
you're going to stick Yugfi with Bakura aren't you?! How horrible! Yugi doesn't deserve such an abusive Yami, although Ryou doesn't either. Having them switch bodies? That's a new one. |
Reviewed By: Taure [MediaMiner Member] On: October 22, 2002 18:46 CDT
Comment/Review:
Melikes! *sits in corner jealous that she can't come up with cool story ideas* Can't wait for the next chapter! |
Reviewed By: maliks gurl [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2002 14:12 CDT
Comment/Review:
continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!continue!!!
Get the picture? |
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