| "Our Night Of Love" Reviews/Comments [ 9 ] |
Title: Our Night Of Love
Reviewed By: Megan Consoer [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2005 02:19 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story alot. Can you write some more chapters?
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Title: shock
Reviewed By: Kevin mask [MediaMiner Member] On: February 26, 2004 14:30 CST
Comment/Review:
0_0 A tad strong ,but good
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Reviewed By: IloveJoey [MediaMiner Member] On: February 25, 2004 20:38 CST
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very good my heart raced the way Kaiba expressed his feelings was amazing
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Reviewed By: Bluejay2099 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2004 21:34 CST
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Wow. That's all I can say. This is incredible, it could be almost anyone. My favorite part was "Plunged deeper into your soul". It seakes volumes, and really shows that there is still a connection between love and sex, even though it is often forgotten these days. I don't think there really needs to be a story attached to it. This kind of poem really speaks for itself. I pity anyone who can't understand that.
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Reviewed By: SSJ Ryoko [MediaMiner Member] On: October 10, 2003 13:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
very original...i like it. it would be even better if there was a story attached 2 it
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Reviewed By: jster1983 On: November 26, 2002 15:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Could you expand on that? |
Reviewed By: whitelight101 On: October 26, 2002 16:02 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good job I enjoyed this poem alot, plz write more!! |
Reviewed By: PK On: October 21, 2002 23:52 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I liked it! I have to agress with Elf here that this was a nice change to some of the stuff out there. I like poems!! ^^ Great job!
Princess Kitana |
Reviewed By: Elf [MediaMiner Member] On: October 20, 2002 17:25 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Actualy, it's pretty good for a first attempt. Work at it some more and you could be very good at this. I also liked the fact that it was poetic, it was a nice change than most of the smut out there. Very cute. I'm glad that you accepted my challange. That was a fun read! |
