| "Trust in blind faith" Reviews/Comments [ 35 ] |
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Reviewed By: Gokuson On: May 12, 2003 14:46 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really love this story, and i hope that you continue it. |
Reviewed By: Skayda [MediaMiner Member] On: April 30, 2003 13:50 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I have to admit, I was orignially going to only glance at your story, you then as I started to really read it, I found myself being drawn more and more into it.
The emotions Trunks is feeling during this crisis, almost losing his Goten had me nearly in tears.
It's plain as the area on Krillin's face where his nose should have been; Trunks and Goten were meant to be together!
Execellent work!
Namkian Slave Girl,
~Ami |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: April 26, 2003 14:16 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh my god. When I first read this last night, I thought my face was going to split, because I was smiling so big!! I LOVED THE END!! The lemon was GORGEOUS, and so well worth waiting for, but the way you ended it...GAH!! SOOO HAPPY! I swear, I was honestly in a good mood the rest of the night JUST BECAUSE OF THIS CHAPTER!! You can ask my hubby, he thought I was a goofball!! SOOOOOO WONDERFUL!!! ~glomps PG~ |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: April 26, 2003 02:41 CDT
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"Marry me?" Definitely it should be "Yes". Give us the next part as soon as possible. This was a nice and sweet lemon. Good job. |
Reviewed By: goku mum On: April 26, 2003 02:44 CDT
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"Marry me?" Definitely it should be "Yes". Give us the next part as soon as possible. This was a nice and sweet lemon. Good job. |
Reviewed By: inatasha On: April 18, 2003 10:16 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
he can't die hes blind that story is so sad I am crying right now. but anyways that was the sadest best I have read this is my third time reading this story and I am probably going to read it again all I can say is fuck damn he can't die ps I wish the rating could go up to a million lata |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2003 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*smacks herself really, really HARD*
I am SOOOO sorry! I SWEAR UP AND DOWN THAT I REVIEWED THIS ALREADY! But, apparently I was wrong... I concede *bows*
Well, what can I say? I love the way that you have Goten in the emotional aspect... Someone who went through what he did would NOT be all happy and bubbly as most would probably write him... Makes ya just wanna pull the poor guy onto your lap and let him cry, ya know?
but oh oh oh oh!... he is such a freaking TEASE!! poor Trunks! well.. MAYBE poor Trunks ;-) depends on what Goten meant by "bedtime".. *snicker*
hehe... and Vegeta giving them use of his secret little condo.. nice touch ;-)
I KNOW I'm gonna love the next chapter, so hurry up and write!!
Toodles! |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 09:35 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
THESE NUMBERS NEED TO GO HIGHER THAN 10!!!!
That was SOOOOO DELICIOUS!!!! Geez, I'm speechless!! Ok, let's let go of the end, and review the rest, shall we?
GOD I loved that Vegeta went behind Bulma's back to help the boys!! That was SO AWESOME!! Now I have hentai thoughts of a TxGt VxGh tag team, of course. ~.^
Ok, let's focus on the lemon again. DAMN that was hot!! Goten is such a little tease, isn't he? But now you've left it with him telling Trunks that it's time for bed...GAH!! Are they going to SLEEP, or are they gonna play? Now I'm gonna sweat about it until the NEXT chapter is posted!! Although at least I can get a new chapter of Forgotten Tears between now and then to hold me over!! ^.^
Thank you for the dedication!! ~GLOMPS SSM~ That was so sweet!!!! ^.^ |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 01:19 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was awsome, the fightbetween mother and son was great. keep up the great work. |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 00:48 CST
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Mwa-haaa! Great lemon! |
Reviewed By: manawolf [MediaMiner Member] On: March 14, 2003 04:29 CST
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I didn't see his fist until it hit my face, full force…
Uh, whoops. ^_^;
Problems can arise when your caretaker is also your mate... the fear that they will leave you tends to stifle things. I know from second-hand experience. This could be awkward... |
Reviewed By: SaintMe [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 23:23 CST
Comment/Review:
eegads!
i really dont know what else to say! GOOD GRAVY THIS IS GETTING GOOD!
hurry and update!!
(heh... I'm such a loser >_ |
Reviewed By: Saiyajin_Raven69 [MediaMiner Member] On: March 12, 2003 21:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWW!!!! I'm SOOO HAPPY that you updated!! You just made my week! This is SO my favorite fic right now!! This chapter was WELL worth waiting for!!
I LOOOVE Trunksiepoo!!! He's SO wonderful!! And Vegeta's acceptance of their relationship is wonderful, too!! LOVED the very end!! Trunksie is just a little too eager, eh? LOL Good for Poopsie, punching the horny little devil!!
THANK YOU for updating!! I promise I'll keep the whip in my closet for awhile now!! AT LEAST a day or two!! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: the shadow girl On: March 12, 2003 20:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
the story was great you must update soon. |
Reviewed By: Sade Kline On: February 25, 2003 18:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is great! I love the whole idea! I reeeeaaally want you to continue!! Please? *cute chibi eyes peer up, with welling tears* This chibi want's you to continue! *scratches head* Wait! This chibi is of age!! :P But please continue! I love your stories! Don't leave me hanging!! |
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