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Reviewed By: Chibi Omi the Archer On: March 22, 2003 12:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
PLEASE Say there is more!!! I love this story, I play an Omi and I made sure my Nagi got a copy of this story. I think it's really cute and you have the charcters just right! Please, Please, Please continue!!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: March 21, 2003 17:03 CST
Comment/Review:
this is a wonderful fic, one thing, i didn't realize that brad was a boxer... aside from that, yeah, did i mention i love this fic? omiXnagi is my favorite pairing after YxA and OxK, and you're doing a really good job of writing this. keep up the good work. i'll be checking for updates.
Mara |
Reviewed By: Rain On: February 06, 2003 19:18 CST
Comment/Review:
PLEASE!!!!! CONTINUE ALREADY!!! I've been checking nearly every day at ff.net and you haven't updated, and it would make me very happy if you would, cuz i love this fic! I have to go now, im on a time restriction, but PLEASE HURRY!!!!!!!!!!
~*Rainey ^-^ |
Reviewed By: Lia - chan On: February 04, 2003 19:53 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Nagi/Omi is one of my favorite pairs as always...
Keep up the fun story (cuz reading these fics is the only life I have^.^")I really like Schwartz's
home life-the "beetshake" sounds just right for Farfie...and my friend ChildoftheMist and I have started chanting "Oh Brraaaaa - dllyy we're borrr-ed!" whenever we see eachother... I have no life.But I love your fic!:) |
Reviewed By: wrathe [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 10:58 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I just spent the better part of a day and a half reading this story, as much as is out so far. As with all of your other works it is excellent. I just get so caught up in the story that I don't want to stop reading. When is the next part out?
Aya really needs to find someone(s) to be with so he can relax a little though, like maybe Y&K. Sorry, I just really do like that pairing.
Otherwise, so far, this is great. A very nice level of angst and romance. I hope to see more in the future. As always, keep up the excellent work. |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 20:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I can't believe I'm reading this!!!
I LOVE it! Even though I haven't seen Weiss Kreuz before but I kinda find the pairing OmixNagi SOOO CUTE that I HAD to READ THIS one TOO. I've really enjoyed it. The style was cool, flowing, funny too. Creativity, it will be a 10, because it's kinda neat bringing two enemies together in one place where they don't have to be enemies. PLEASE SEND MORE!!!! |
Reviewed By: Fake Angel On: December 28, 2002 23:37 CST
Comment/Review:
I'm thoroughly enjoying this fanfic! I read it all in two days, hehe, and I really want to find out how things go! Please continue! Onegai! Omi and Nagi are so cute. =^_^= |
Reviewed By: Hope On: December 10, 2002 22:44 CST
Comment/Review:
Nice fic!!! I'm enjoying reading this, and I've already put it on my list of fics to keep checking up on! Kudos on a awesome story! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Nalan Li On: December 07, 2002 12:01 CST
Comment/Review:
::glomp:: Feel better soon. Depression is not a fun thing at all.
As to the fic, sugoi! Nagi and Omi's IM chats are cute as all hell. And poor Aya-kun.
Incidentally, I like your version of Schwarz. I read your fics before seeing the series in its entirety, and I was sorta disappointed in the canon version of Schwarz. Not quite what I expected after your interpretations of them. ^.^;
Anycase, encouragement from over here and glomps and all that fun stuff. You make pretty things, and thanks for sharing them with us. ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Akari On: December 04, 2002 11:24 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh man, the names they were coming up with to refer to their team mates as were cracking me up. Good job. (as usual) Can't wait for more. |
Reviewed By: Nalan Li On: December 03, 2002 23:14 CST
Comment/Review:
Sugoi! I had no idea you'd updated this over here!
It's lovely, lovely work. I'm thoroughly enjoying Aya's slow slide to wherever he'll end up, along with Omi's denials of crush-having. ^.^ ::bounce:: Also the interplay between the four bishounen is wonderfully done. You've got the characterization down, and the motivations for each action are completely clear and natural. ::throws more encouragement at you:: |
Reviewed By: Akari On: December 01, 2002 04:06 CST
Comment/Review:
Waiii! I'm loving this so far. *much hugs*
Keep up the excellent work, I can't wait for the next part. |
Reviewed By: Midori Natari Himura [MediaMiner Member] On: December 05, 2002 07:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ah, I just reviewed every chapter of this on FF.Net, but seeing it here, I decided to leave a little comment, since I know a lot of people at MediaMiner are lax about reviewing.
As Mariah said, you do devote a lot of attention to characterization. I think it is wonderful because than we can truly connect to the characters involved and feel for them.
You are very gifted. I hope you keep entertaining us for a long while to come!
(And I promise to get to your Saiyuki fics once I see the series. I have had it for months, but still haven't watched it. I either get distracted by another anime or get too busy with school, but I probably should watch it anyway since I have posters of the bishounen littering my room. *giggles*)
Take care and post more soon!
~Midori^_^ |
Reviewed By: Mariah On: November 20, 2002 14:13 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Thank you for a very enjoyable fic. You devote such loving attention to characterization. |
Reviewed By: Carter Tachikawa [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 11:33 CST
Comment/Review:
I already reviewed every chapter of this on FFN but I thought I should come here and do it to.
As always, excellent story. You do a good job of portraying Omi and Nagi's little relationship as well as the relationships between their teammates. Your writing style is nice yet not overflowy the some authors have.
I'm still curious to see how this will all turn out. I want to know what'll happen on the mission and how this will affect the relationships.
I can't wait for the next chapter. But take your time. I know whatever you come up with, it'll be good.
See ya around. KIU
~CT |
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