Reviewed By: Red Phoenix (AKA B-chan) On: October 27, 2002 13:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I *NEVER* expected you to add something like *THAT* to the story!!! Poor Seren and Kaiba!!! How *EMBARRESSING*!!!! Coulda been worse; *Mokuba* could have been there! Now *THAT* would've been awkward! Then again...given Joey's personality and over-protective nature towards his precious :::coughs::: 'baby' sister, it wasn't that shocking. Sure was funny as Hell, though ^_^!
:::beams with pleasure:::Thank you *SO* much for that compliment! I'm glad you thought my fic was beautiful. I do try my best. I *am* going to revise it; I *know* I can do better and improve on it. I'll let ya know when I finish.
Write more of these! :::smirks:::Hmmm, wonder what Yami, Tea, Tristan and Ryou will say when they here about *THIS*. (Tristan would probably die laughing!) |
