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Title: Chapter 3
Reviewed By: Kakarots-Frying-Pan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 06, 2003 14:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
*glomps angelchan* That was so cute~! *squeals as she hugs her Omi-plushie* I hope you update soon. Hm... I like the 3-some idea... would Aya be able to get in there? You could have one pretty little 4-some ^.~ You positivily -must- update soon, really... you have to.
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Reviewed By: fragrance [MediaMiner Member] On: October 07, 2003 21:01 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 6 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 7 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
[taps chin] Update- that's about all I can say. Omi's gotten raped- Youji is messed up in the head- and well... the main pairing should be Ken/Omi. Yeah!
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Reviewed By: Snowshoe koneko On: September 24, 2003 16:11 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
um... I LOVE THIS!!!! Yo-tan's in for a world of hurt! I like the Ken/Omi/Nagi! Omi MUST be uke though pleases! ^_^;;; I just can't imagine him any other way...
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Reviewed By: Grenadin On: September 15, 2003 05:02 CDT
Comment/Review:
I love your story and on top I love the Omi/Nagi pairing, but I think that a Omi/Nagi/Ken is so much more irresistible! ^__^
But in his review 'Precognition74' was right: please torture a little also Nagi }:) *evil-smile* |
Reviewed By: Rui On: September 14, 2003 14:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Good plot, although it is slightly frightening...I would never imagine Yohji doing something like this to Omi...anyway, I love the Omi/Nagi pairing. It's one of my favorites. Please write more. ^_^ Can't wait. |
Reviewed By: Yanagi_sen On: September 14, 2003 07:15 CDT
Comment/Review:
Gaaah... that's it? More!!!! And I want to find out what's going on with Nagi-kins!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Omi-ecchi On: September 13, 2003 14:31 CDT
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Wow, Yohji's.. a total fuggin b*stard...
I'm a KO fan.. and you set up KO nicely in that last chap... |
Reviewed By: Precognition74 On: September 13, 2003 11:04 CDT
Comment/Review:
omiXnagi forever !!! please let that friend me nagi... perhaps we should add a little nagi torture as well... *smirks* |
Reviewed By: Snowshoe koneko On: July 26, 2003 11:09 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
EEP!!! Oh my... Wah, Yohji-kun!!!!!! Schu-kun!!!!!! Why they so bad?.... T-T Poor Omittichi!!!!! You must post soon!!! I'm gonna go crazy like Ken with worry!!! Oh yeah, I love the story! No kill Omi please! Is Aya-kun gonna help Omi and Ken? Why's he not there when Yo-tan was??? |
Reviewed By: Suzaku On: June 19, 2003 19:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
I really like your story so far. Yohji sure is an ass. Usually I like that pairing but hes a total dick. Write more soon please. |
Reviewed By: Fake Angel On: December 26, 2002 23:13 CST
Comment/Review:
Hiya,
Just a review and a request to please continue this fic! I wanna know what happens to poor Omi and those kisamas Yohji and Schu! (Well, they're kisamas in this fic, I usually like them. ^_^ )And if I'm not mistaken, Ken-kun and Omi-chan are still good? I've always liked them as a couple...but that's your choice. ^_^
Ja! |
Reviewed By: Seema On: December 13, 2002 16:02 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
I just love this fic |
Reviewed By: Shadowcatcher [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 07:20 CST
Comment/Review:
*snuggles Omi while glaring daggers at Yohji and Schu* Yohji, Schuldig... I'll give you to the count of three before I hunt you both down... *evil grin* How does being a eunuch sound to you?*growls*
Poor Omi-kun... |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 19:31 CST
Comment/Review:
Poor Omittchi! *sniffle* Damn Yohji! I'm starting to really not like him. This fic coupled with seeing episode 5 (with Ken and Yuriko).. grrr! Yohji is such a bastard.. *fumes* Will Ken kill him? Please? Or at least hurt him a lot? |
Reviewed By: Jade Green [MediaMiner Member] On: October 29, 2002 00:48 CST
Comment/Review:
O.O *whimpers* BAD YOHJI! *kicks Yohji and Schu in the shins, then runs far, far away with Omi* I'll protect you Omi.. *cuddles*
Please say that was all a bad dream... please? |
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