"NEW VERSION: "Do you remember me?"" Reviews/Comments [ 81 ] |
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Reviewed By: scarlettrose On: January 08, 2003 22:41 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I like this seen too |
Reviewed By: angel On: January 08, 2003 08:23 CST Comment/Review: found your fic and i LOVE it. i cant wait to find out what happends next. write more soon, si vous plat! |
Reviewed By: SailorChibiSaturn On: January 07, 2003 12:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I love that scene to but you have one problem. There's no more! I want MOOOOOOORRRRRRRRRREEEEEEEEE PPPPPPPPPPPPLLLLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Aria On: January 06, 2003 17:32 CST Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Oh my god you have got to write more! Is the next scene going to be a lemon? Please please please write again soon this is such a good story you have to continue it! God I love stories! Oh and if you do not make this a happy ending I swear I will hunt you down and kill you. (I can't really do that but I really LOVE happy endings)
Write again soon,
Aria |
Reviewed By: claire On: January 06, 2003 00:20 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Love it!!! More please! |
Reviewed By: Jo K On: January 05, 2003 22:26 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 7 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: wheeee!! another lovely chapter!! ^_^ i can't wait for this fic to be finished! i want to see odin n solo together!! ^________^ |
Reviewed By: KawaiiChiri On: January 05, 2003 18:11 CST Comment/Review: OH COME ON!! For cryin out loud!! REMEMBER EACH OTHER! =) Wonderful story!! Waaaaah! Continue!! Lemons.....make...lemonade! ^_^;; |
Reviewed By: Goggle Girl On: January 05, 2003 17:47 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: awww, awww, awww, u must continue!!!!!!!! no, i order u to continue, that is so sweet! Solo and Odin are finally reunited! yay!!! |
Reviewed By: Nekocin [MediaMiner Member] On: January 05, 2003 14:39 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: I'm using a public computer so I've little time to comment right now.
I've given you a 9 for your style of writing, because sometimes I've
You've some mistakes... but no biggie.
Originality is 10, because it's quite like an AU fiction. First start when they were little and then later turns out they're comrades [thinking that the other was dead]
I've really enjoyed it. It's kawaii... although I've not read chapter 10 yet since my personal Internet access is going weird. I can't save chapter 10 in notepad and my floppy either [that's my way of saving time]. But anyways, please write more. |
Reviewed By: SailorChibiSaturn@hotmail.com On: January 03, 2003 18:48 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: Love this fic. I love how this is turning out. Though this going kind of slowly though. I can understand though. Genius takes time! I'll be waiting for more and can't wait to see how this fic ends! |
Reviewed By: scarlettrose On: December 30, 2002 15:54 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: I hope the next chapter comes out soon |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 16:41 CST Comment/Review: exelent fic so far but theres one itty bitty little thing wrong. *Ahem* *puppy dog eyes* you havent got any more yet. *ahem* *Back to normal* and BTW does Hee-chan get mad at Duo-chan for not telling him. plz say no. i have seen too many of those and half the time they turn out crappy.
great fic,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: Daremyth [MediaMiner Member] On: December 26, 2002 15:55 CST Comment/Review: oy. ::glare:: SURE! leave us off with a CLIFF HANGER, why don't you?! ::vicious glare:: HURRY UP, dammit! ::blink:: ::sweet smile:: have a nice day..! ^.^
-Daremyth |
Reviewed By: Ita-chan On: December 22, 2002 08:16 CST Comment/Review: HHUUURRRRYYYYYYYYY-UUUUPPPPPPP,...MMMOOOREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE CHAAAPTERRRRRRRRRRRRSSSS,...OONEGAAIIIIIIII!!^_~!! |
Reviewed By: Dark_Fox On: December 17, 2002 10:37 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: AAAHHHHHHHHHHH How could u leave it there. any way cant wait for the next chapter. |
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