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| "Love is not a Flower you can Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] | Reviewed By: The Bebop Cow On: November 03, 2002 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just gonna cry. The last page or so was totally unexpected, which put a totally new element and spin on things. Student vash creating manga vash was a brilliant idea. There was a moment or two when I couldnt figure out what was present tence and what was past tense, but the two coming together into a concurrent reality was beutiful. Yup. I'm gonna cry again. Excellent writing. (( Of course I was crying in the first place, but thats beside the point )) | Reviewed By: Pixie252 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 22:23 CST
Comment/Review:
VERY well done! I really like your character development, and the way the universes seem parallel at the very end. You did a great Job of tying Trigun into the AU fic. Keep up the good work, a sequel, maybe? | | Pages (2): [ « ‹ 1 2 ] |
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