| "Love is not a Flower you can Touch" Reviews/Comments [ 17 ] |
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Reviewed By: StarHoshi [MediaMiner Member] On: October 16, 2003 03:18 CDT
Comment/Review:
::bawls::So beutiful. It was so moving. I luv ya. Write more please. Your very good.
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Reviewed By: MistressRenet On: August 19, 2003 22:21 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
So sweet, so sad, so much fun. |
Reviewed By: Rinchan's flower [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 23:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Amazing, absolutly amazing! I loved this fic! I don't know what else to say but amazing! |
Reviewed By: Li LaCour [MediaMiner Member] On: June 25, 2003 10:56 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You've got to continue this. Its really good. Please write more. PLEASE! |
Reviewed By: Alucard On: April 17, 2003 17:35 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please Please Please Please!! Please write more.. I have just now discovered this site and I just finished reading your story. I was really, really close to shedding tears *which I never do* and I would REALLY appreciate it if you wrote more about their relationship, what happens afterwards, etc. Alright? Really, really, really good.... More please? |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 09, 2003 17:45 CST
Comment/Review:
For a first fic, this is fab. Absolutely perfect. Look *points to tears* you even made me cry. Kami, but that was... Woah... When I come up with a word that I can use to describe this fic, I'll let you know, K?
Sequal? Osoraku? Un? ONEGAI!!!
Ja now!
KK =^.^= |
Reviewed By: animekid On: March 03, 2003 16:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
another AU, but this one is different, sice it's on Earth! (for the people that don't know, Trigun is on another planet.) I also like the fact that Vash is an artist drawing and writing the show! Overall, it was a pretty good fic. |
Reviewed By: jammers On: January 21, 2003 17:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love your soothely flowing style of writing, though you had a single spelling mistake. It was a little long or at least wihtout too much desired action consistently present, however the originality expressed by Vash actually writing Trigun is very eminent. That's a completely new idea to me and I LIKE IT! KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK |
Reviewed By: iMaxed5770 On: January 01, 2003 06:45 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great job! I loved how developed the characters were and Vash's point of view throughout the story. The ending was also very fitting and touching. I would definately appreciate a sequel of some sort. :) |
Reviewed By: Wyldehorse [MediaMiner Member] On: December 11, 2002 07:00 CST
Comment/Review:
Ooh, nice! I like it, I like it all! This so needs more! I want to know what happens with this relationship! What if people at school find out? What would their reaction be? What would Aunt Rem's reaction be? Where does Nicholas live, and why does he want out? Can you try to write more? |
Reviewed By: zingzinglee [MediaMiner Member] On: November 09, 2002 10:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is brilliant work, I cannot find words to express how much it moved me. YOur writing style, your character development...the wonderful ending that drew everything together. Perfection, pure and simple.
Now if you excuse me, I have to go bawl in a corner with my blankie. |
Reviewed By: Bunny On: November 05, 2002 18:03 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that is the pureest thing i've ever read, it shows what most people feel around someone they love. i would have to say that is the best and truest thing i've ever and will ever read, i hope to see much more like this. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Talon Sage [MediaMiner Member] On: November 03, 2002 02:53 CST
Comment/Review:
*pout* I'm not 'llowed to read this version of the fic yet. Kassan said I haffta finish watching Trigun first, so I am. *glares at netflix*
But the edited version she sent me was wunerful!!!
*glompgrope*
Sage
*awaiting more Trigun...* |
Reviewed By: The Bebop Cow On: November 03, 2002 02:02 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I'm just gonna cry. The last page or so was totally unexpected, which put a totally new element and spin on things. Student vash creating manga vash was a brilliant idea. There was a moment or two when I couldnt figure out what was present tence and what was past tense, but the two coming together into a concurrent reality was beutiful. Yup. I'm gonna cry again. Excellent writing. (( Of course I was crying in the first place, but thats beside the point )) |
Reviewed By: Pixie252 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 01, 2002 22:23 CST
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VERY well done! I really like your character development, and the way the universes seem parallel at the very end. You did a great Job of tying Trigun into the AU fic. Keep up the good work, a sequel, maybe? |
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