| "FROM BAD TO WORSE..." Reviews/Comments [ 141 ] |
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Reviewed By: JK On: October 27, 2001 11:16 CDT
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Beautiful chapter with the right amount of comedy and angst. Having Vegeta eat the condom was something rather interesting and something that I have never seen before. The hallucinated (or is it) Z-Fighter interaction was extremely disturbing and thought provoking. and the fact that he's now hallucinating Nappa and his father calling him home is making me worry about Veggie. Dr. Briefs at the end....oh my....what's going to happen now? Keep up the fantastic work. |
Reviewed By: bkerrmom1 On: October 27, 2001 12:01 CDT
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Great Chapter!! What a ride!! Can't wait for the next one. |
Reviewed By: faded On: October 27, 2001 13:39 CDT
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Get more out. I hope ffnet can get running up again. |
Reviewed By: hibari heza On: October 27, 2001 14:02 CDT
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That was a great new chapter. I love this fic and I can't wait for the next update. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: BaP On: October 27, 2001 15:41 CDT
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AH!! i cant believe u would just leave Chapter 13 hanging like that! This is ~KILLER~! |
Reviewed By: lenika On: October 27, 2001 16:53 CDT
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Man I love this story!!! All the suspense is driving me crazy, but I love this story. Always looking forward to reading the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Dark S. Princess (SMDSP) On: October 27, 2001 16:55 CDT
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*ROTFLMAO* Oh, my good. The bedroom scene was just too funny. I couldn't stop myself from laughing outloud. I can't believe he ate it. This is getting good. I await the next chapter. |
Reviewed By: Crimson On: October 27, 2001 17:10 CDT
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*claps* MORE! I don't think they are ooc, I think this is a really good story that really does explain how Vegeta changed from being a killer to being tamed by Bulma^^ Keep up the great writing! You are talented! |
Reviewed By: Eloy Brightdreamer On: October 27, 2001 17:25 CDT
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OK, I'm still really liking this story. It's one of the best B/V stories I've ever read. There's just one little tiny nitpick that's been bothering me. You say in Ch. 12 that Vegeta's normal temp is about 112. If that were so, there'd be no way Bulma could tell he had a fever just by touching him. I'm guessing you put that in there for shock for the doctor, but it's a little hard to belive. Like I said, just a little nitpick, nothing that would stop me from reading this story and loving it! |
Reviewed By: Ember On: October 27, 2001 17:47 CDT
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Impecible writing as ever! This is definitely one of my all time fave fics. The condom scene was just too funny. I can't believe you're making us wait for the lemon, though, thats just cruel, but hey punishment isn't necessarily a bad thing lol. I just can't wait for the next chapter! K i'll stop doing cartwheels now, sayonara tensai *-_-* |
Reviewed By: seiya_odango On: October 27, 2001 17:54 CDT
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Gah! Cliffhanger! Cliffhanger! You are truly evil. Poor Vegeta. Condoms must not be something he's not at all experienced with... I'm REALLY glad that you poster. I've considered posting my chapters here. I suspected Fanfiction.Net was going to go bankrupt, but I didn't actually think there was that possibility. Anyway, wonderful chapter, I'm dying for the next! |
Reviewed By: Buffynick6 On: October 27, 2001 19:36 CDT
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Chapter 13 is awesome:) good job :) thanks for posting even though FF.NET isnt working :) i know a lot of writers who have suspendend writing there fics until FF.NET is working so thanks for keeping us entertained :) great job :) |
Reviewed By: Jan_AQ On: October 27, 2001 20:39 CDT
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My favorite line of Chap 13 was: "If it wasn't having the cuffs of his pants hemmed up
because they were too damn long, it was having to find some clothes in the
mall's children section. Was there anything about this planet that wasn't
intended to be personally humiliating?" LOL! Keep writing! :) |
Reviewed By: Alexa On: October 27, 2001 21:03 CDT
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WOW!!!!! I am so far on the edge of my seat that I think I'm going to fall off!!!!!! That was an excellent chapter!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: anonymous On: October 27, 2001 21:17 CDT
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Not only was this chapter hallarious but it was absolute perfection. The usual from Darke Angelus. ^.~ It's an amaziong story. I can't wait to find out what Dr. Breifs wanted and exactly why the Z Fighters were searching the city. |
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