| "Words That Are Spoken Yet Remain Silent" Reviews/Comments [ 12 ] |
Reviewed By: shivalatina [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2006 09:34 CDT
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Tbis was a very inventive and beautiful story. I'm also very happy that someone finally put that pitiful excuse for a human being out of everyones misery. Very good work. I hope this is a sequal to read.
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Reviewed By: Kelsa On: July 19, 2004 02:29 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really loved this story and you should sooooo write a sequel to it!!
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Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 29, 2004 00:41 CDT
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*look at the dream* Awwwww...That kinda of sad. Poor Vegeta lose your Mother and Father to that (beep) (Beep)ing Freiza. Yay, Bulma is about to be train in fighting.
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Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 23:42 CDT
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Bulma is a sayain!?! How is that? OH Yeah they are now mate....WOOHOO!!!
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Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 23:36 CDT
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Vegeta and Bulma are in love. *Run off to read more*
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Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 19:42 CDT
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So that why he doesn't like that..thing. *eyes twisted* Yamcha tried to do WHHHHAAATTTTT!?!?!?!? Good going Vegeta!!
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Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 28, 2004 18:32 CDT
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vampkestrel is right onna does means women in Japanese not Saiyin. OOOOOWWWWWW!!!! That has to hurt! Must....Read...more.
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Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 23:35 CDT
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Yup, this is a A/U. Vegeta and Bulma are in Love...
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Reviewed By: Guan Long The Insane Fan of Bardock [MediaMiner Member] On: April 27, 2004 22:52 CDT
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Oh this is get good.
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Reviewed By: MistressChaos [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2003 19:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow! I absolutely loved it! It was great. You did have a few things wrong here and there. Like you said Bulma couldn't remember anything before she was 14, but when Vegeta gave her the 'memory potion thingy' to make her forget, she was 16. You also had a few garmmar mistakes and stuff like that. There were other things that were a little confusing and messed up, but all in all it was really good. I truly enjoyed reading it. It was VERY creative to. I really liked the whole dragons thing. I'm guessing the other two dragons are Bra and Goten? Could be....or not. Heehee. So, where is Raditz anyways? Well, I'm gonna go read the sequel, maybe I'll find out, right. Lol. Oh, it really suck that you only have 3 review (including mine) you really deserve A LOT more. Anyways, Ja ne. ~MistressChaos~
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Reviewed By: speed demon On: January 10, 2003 22:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I LOVED!!!!!!! this fic it the BEST and MOST CREATIVE fic I have ever read and I have read ALOT of fics but this 1 is by far the best I liked it for MANY reasons a few are bulma can fight (yah) Vegeta is the strongest (it only makes sence that vegeta is strongest!!!!!!!!!!!!) I also LOVED the other ssj form it's better then the real one and the dragon idea was the bomb the best part of the dragon idea were the different kinds like ice fire ect.......... I also liked the Raditiz not being dead thing any way..............
you are a GREAT GREAT author with tons of talent !!!!!!!!!!!!
and I hope you continue 2 write I can't wait for the continued story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: vampkestrel [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 01:55 CST
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cool so far but i just thought i'd tell ya onna means women in japanese not in saiyin.... lol ok i'm just on the second chapter i'll review again once i've read it all |
