| "A new Dawning" Reviews/Comments [ 468 ] |
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Reviewed By: DKasshu On: July 18, 2003 16:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 6 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
i think it's very creative, but i just don't see allenby and domon together. i think rain and domon belong together. get rid of the blue haired chick. that's y the enjoyment factor is so low. i think u should kill off allenby!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: none On: July 07, 2003 20:28 CDT
Comment/Review:
Please put another chapter up. At least tell me your going to continue!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
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