| "Playgrounds of the Mind" Reviews/Comments [ 40 ] |
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Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 13, 2002 21:33 CST
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please update? *begs*
Mara |
Reviewed By: shellagh22 On: December 04, 2002 00:09 CST
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i really enjoyed reading your fic!! it's very funny and original. hope to see more of your writing! :p |
Reviewed By: Inume On: December 02, 2002 21:18 CST
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I agree with Mara-chan. Miroku's act on the kareoke machine was priceless. and I want to see what Inuyasha does with the part he taped!!!!!
I love the songs you chose and think it would be so funny if Sango and Miroku put on the same kind of little show like Inuyasha and Kagome did in a pair as well!! |
Reviewed By: Inume On: December 02, 2002 21:17 CST
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I agree with Mara-chan. Miroku's act on the Kareoke machine was priceless and I want to se what Inuyasha does with the part he taped!!!!!
I love the songs you chose and think it would be so funny if Sango and Miroku put on the kind of little show like Inuyasha and Kagome did in a pair as well!! |
Reviewed By: Lorraine On: December 02, 2002 19:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that was a good, very good an A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++ story. please write another.
i love it |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 05:10 CST
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oh NO! i can't believe kagome did that... what's gonne happen? i'm dying to know! please update fast!
Mara |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 30, 2002 12:20 CST
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Noooo! oh dont you just hate it when that happends
...... ^.^ ohh kagome's gonna get it! ^.^'poor inu! :( *.* ohh can i go to the funeral? is kagome gonna make himclean her room? inuyasha would get revenge if kagome made him do something stupid.....^.^ ^.^ ^.^ |
Reviewed By: Inume On: November 30, 2002 11:21 CST
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Oooo. That is a cliffhanger. The best one ever with Inuyasha's eyes meeting hers to spell out 'betrayal'.
Too bad. That's why you have to pay attention at something like that.
Keep up your good work in the rest of the chapters and other fics!!! |
Reviewed By: Inume On: November 30, 2002 11:21 CST
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Oooo. That is a cliffhanger. The best one ever with Inuyasha's eyes meeting hers to spell out 'betrayal'.
Too bad. That's why you have to pay attention at something like that.
Keep up your good work in the rest of the chapters and other fics!!! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 22:58 CST
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that was great! especially when inu dumped the bucket on kouga! hehehe. and, if i had to pick between kagura/sess and kagura/kouga i'd pick k/k, because while in the anime i think kagura/sess would be an awesome pariring, the way you're writing it it k/k would fit better. i think the sess/rin pairing would be really cool here, that little obsession rin is developing would kind of fall flat otherwise, unless you're planning on pairing her off with shippo.
Mara
write more! i'll be checking! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 12:29 CST
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that chapter was great! miroku's act with the kareoke was priceless! i love your writing style! p lease write more, i'll be checking to see! |
Reviewed By: Mara-chan [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2002 17:08 CST
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pleeease update! |
Reviewed By: inususu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 21:17 CST
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cool |
Reviewed By: Moon_Kitsune On: November 08, 2002 08:36 CST
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YAY!!! keep writing keep writing keep writing!!!!
~allie~ |
Reviewed By: lito On: December 19, 2002 16:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
please hurry up with the update. this is really good i can't wait to see what will happen |
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