| "Aibou" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Kari On: November 29, 2002 21:23 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
You must continue. PLEASE! And soon. |
Reviewed By: ^_____^ On: November 29, 2002 16:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NO!!!! YOU MUST WRITE MORE!!!!! I'M BEGGING YOU!!!! FOR THE LOVE OF CHOBITS, WRITE MORE!!!!! 0____0 |
Reviewed By: Sadistic Gohan [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful, absolutely brilliant! Please continue! |
Reviewed By: Terendel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 28, 2002 16:02 CST
Comment/Review:
Very good the way you had Yami start out insubstantial. Some very nice interactions between them. Excellent emotional content. Very satisfying. As to the lemon...
Well come on! Don't leave us there. Poor Yugi, trapped in unfinished fic limbo for days with a raging hard-on. Cruel, cruel author. ;-) |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 27, 2002 17:29 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: That was so beautiful!Every comment, every sense of desire! All of it! I just abhor the fact that you left us with a cliffhanger... yet again!
SilentDarkness: Having your readers slip to the very edge of their seats in excitement, simply to leave them with their feelings of restlessness with a cliffhanger, is absolute brilliance.
BleedingAngel: No, it isn't! It's psychological torture! Madness, I tell you! It's badness with a touch of evil! >_
SilentDarkness: *chuckles* According to you, it's a small piece of hell.
BleedingAngel: That's because it is!
SilentDarkness: *shakes her head, still laughing*
BleedingAngel: I hope to see the next chapter soon! Please, post as soon as you can, but don't overwork yourself, okies? ^_^ Remember, Rest and relaxation is the key to happiness! *.* |
Reviewed By: loanshark On: November 27, 2002 13:17 CST
Comment/Review:
nice!!! *grinz* you FINALLY updated again...haha...that was...cool...
anywayz, can't wait for the next part!! yay!!! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 06:55 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
DID I MENTION YOU'RE ONE OF MY FAVE AUTHORS? THAT'S ALL I GOTTA SAY I love THIS STORY!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: November 27, 2002 00:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Aaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhh!!!!! EVIL! WHHHHAAAA! WANT LOTS MORE MORE MORE!! REALLY REALLY SOON!! SOON SOON SOON SOON SOON! PLEASE PRETTY PRETTY PLEASE WITH A KAWAII YUUGI ON TOP??!!! ^_~I LOVE YOUR FIC!! PLEASE DON'T LEAVE IT THERE! IT'S JUST GETTING REALLY GOOD, YOU CAN'T STOP NOW! THIS IS TOTALLY THE BEST YUUGI & YAMI LEMON I'VE EVER READ. ^_^ MORE CHAPPY SOON PWWWWEASSE??!!!! ^_____^ Ja ne!
~Yuugi+Yami4Ever&Ever!~ |
Reviewed By: MoonGirl On: November 26, 2002 22:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
This is such a great story. Beautifully writen, I Ioved it. If I could I would put 100 as the rating.
keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: DarkMagician On: November 26, 2002 22:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AngelMouseGirl is right. MUST HAVE MORE.Haw could you be so cruel? I adore you`r wrighting thogh, but I MUST HAVE MOOOOOOOOOORRRRRRREEEEEEEEEE. You are so cruel to you`r readers. Pleaswe finish soon. Must know what happens to those two. Do they getb it on or does Yugi find out what Yami wants to do and run? WE MUST KNOW. WE MUST. Eather way please hurry . Im going crazy |
Reviewed By: Emi Rodri On: November 26, 2002 16:22 CST
Comment/Review:
o wow u must finish the story. I loved it how after he turned solid from a ghost, he was able to feel again. The way you described the touches, the kisses the emotion, it's just to great! keep it up and remember you write and we review ... you're a genius!
emi^_^ |
Reviewed By: Kalea2882 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 13:13 CST
Comment/Review:
You Can So Not Leave It There!!! |
Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 07:00 CST
Comment/Review:
AWWWWW MANNNN!!!! You gotta finish this...I am so glad Yugi and Yami are getting their bond on.......I was waiting on that part!!!! Hurry and finish it pleeeeaaassseee!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: clairekygal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fanfic! Definitely one of the best YamixYugi ones out there! :) I thought all the chapters were great, and was really excited to see that you'd finished the third. After reading it, I just wanted to say that it was awesome! But I do have one little pet peeve of mine regarding Yami during the love scene--he just seemed a little *too* knowledgable to me about such things. I would've thought that a guy who'd been shut up in the darkness of the Millenium Puzzle until just recently would have been a little more clueless about the sex-act. Especially M/M sex! But like I said, just one teeny, tiny pet peeve of mine that in no way takes away from the overall enjoyment of your story. Hope to read more soon! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 00:29 CST
Comment/Review:
EVIL!!! How COULD YOU END IT THERE! MOOORE |
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