| "Aibou" Reviews/Comments [ 83 ] |
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Reviewed By: Naturi [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 07:00 CST
Comment/Review:
AWWWWW MANNNN!!!! You gotta finish this...I am so glad Yugi and Yami are getting their bond on.......I was waiting on that part!!!! Hurry and finish it pleeeeaaassseee!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: clairekygal [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 01:49 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Very nice fanfic! Definitely one of the best YamixYugi ones out there! :) I thought all the chapters were great, and was really excited to see that you'd finished the third. After reading it, I just wanted to say that it was awesome! But I do have one little pet peeve of mine regarding Yami during the love scene--he just seemed a little *too* knowledgable to me about such things. I would've thought that a guy who'd been shut up in the darkness of the Millenium Puzzle until just recently would have been a little more clueless about the sex-act. Especially M/M sex! But like I said, just one teeny, tiny pet peeve of mine that in no way takes away from the overall enjoyment of your story. Hope to read more soon! ^__^ |
Reviewed By: Blue September [MediaMiner Member] On: November 26, 2002 00:29 CST
Comment/Review:
EVIL!!! How COULD YOU END IT THERE! MOOORE |
Reviewed By: Djehuti [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 21:46 CST
Comment/Review:
So sorry everyone for the long wait for chapter three! I just dropped in to say that I am almost finished part 3 so you should see it very soon! I have been working in the mall non-stop and haven't had a lot of time to right. I have been writing pieces on a clip board as much as I could the last couple of weeks! I am happy to report that Yugi and Yami are quite enjoying themselves and you should be able to read it soon!
Thanks!
Djehuti |
Reviewed By: CasualOtaku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 02:01 CST
Comment/Review:
Argh! Why did you have to stop there?! It was getting so good! *pouts* Well, you said there was more. How long until we see it? Please say it's soon.
Need my Yugi fix! |
Reviewed By: Tabs On: November 23, 2002 14:54 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it!! ^_^ It's soo Kawaii. They make such a cute couple. You are an excellent writer. You put so much detail into everything you write. How you descrbed the feeling Yugi got when he touches Yami, *moans* Great! You are very talented and I hope to hear more from ya. ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Michiru On: December 06, 2002 16:13 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It is really really good!!!! Please continue!!! |
Reviewed By: DarkWitch On: November 22, 2002 04:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Ahhhhh you're so bad!!!! Why did you stop when it was just getting good???
Argggghhhh this fic is so sweet plesse hurry up!!!! I"m going crazy!!!! |
Reviewed By: RyuArashi On: November 21, 2002 13:40 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AAAAAH!!! Damn you for leaving us hanging like that!!!You had better finsh this story, or I'll send the Grim Reaper after you...AAAaaarh!
I love this story!!! Finsh it! Finish it! |
Reviewed By: Koryu On: November 15, 2002 21:41 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
damn, no 11s? I am absolutely in love with this story. It's gorgeous! Please, PLEASE write more! |
Reviewed By: AngelicMouseGirl On: November 14, 2002 01:36 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH!!!!!!!!!!!!! MOOOOOOOOORRRREEEE!!!! ^_^PLEASE MORE MUST HAVE MORE MUST HAVE MORE MUST HAVVVE MOOOORREE!! REALLY REALLY REALLY REALLY SOOOOOOOOOOON! SOON! SOON!^_^ I TOTALLY ABSOLUTELY ADORE AND 100% LOVE THIS FIC TO DEATH!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! REALLY! =D PLEASE PRETTY PLEASE HAVE MORE CHAPPY SOON!! (AND MAYBE EVEN GET TO SOME LEMONY FUN??^_~)
(Y+Y4EVER&EVER!) |
Reviewed By: WildWing [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wonderful writing, as always! ^_^ I am in love
with this fic, can't wait for the next part! |
Reviewed By: Shorty22 On: November 13, 2002 14:53 CST
Comment/Review:
I must say I agree with BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness. Your story is so vivid! The interactions between them, just... wow!
Although, I must mention the red eyes/lighting the candle scene in the first chapter. I'm not sure why, seeing as how I loved several scenes in the story, since many were just so elaborate, but there's just something in that one scene. The unintentional fright from Yami's seemingly curiousity of Yugi's doings, perhaps... the whole innocence of the scene. I don't know why I'm making it such a big deal. ^-^;
I can't wait to see the next part. (EVIL cliffhanger! ^-^;; ) |
Reviewed By: BleedingAngel&SilentDarkness On: November 12, 2002 20:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
BleedingAngel: oh, oh... *in pleasurable awe* Your elaborations are enchanting. I can nearly feel the soft skin of Yami's face... taste the sweetness of Yugi's lips... and hear the increasing thumps of their hearts beneath their flesh. Your writing is amazing.
SilentDarkness: The gentle flickerings of candle light, and the illuminations of flame... the vivid descriptions of the sensual atmosphere...
BleedingAngel: And let's not forget the way Yami's unsolidified form is awakened through words. I shall not lie. I physically shivered when reading the small interactions Yugi attemtped to make with his darker half. Cool air gliding over fingers... *sighs dreamily*
SilentDarkness: I must agree.
BleedingAngel: Please, post the third part. I'll be anticipating it ^_~ |
Reviewed By: ccam3 On: November 12, 2002 17:10 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
hmm...it cool -_o |
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