| "Love Witch" Reviews/Comments [ 57 ] |
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Reviewed By: something u scrape off your shoe On: January 15, 2003 19:02 CST
Comment/Review:
lol. great story. could've done without the blow job, but i ain't complain'n.
PAV |
Reviewed By: cow man On: January 15, 2003 18:58 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
lmao. i almost fell out of my chair laughing at the end. keep up the good work |
Reviewed By: KawaiiFryingPanChick [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2002 09:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Awwww...I'm a hopeless romantic tho, not as big as perv as others, so i gave you a nine. But it was great! A few mispellings, it's 'dammit' (i've seen it like 100 times) Do a Sango/Miroku one! That would be cute! |
Reviewed By: cute_kittie_kait [MediaMiner Member] On: December 21, 2002 08:47 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love it! It's how I saw them getting together. You know a real life or death thing. The Witch being a love Witch! That's so cute! |
Reviewed By: i ain't tellin' On: November 27, 2002 15:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
the blowjob portion of the story wasn't needed, and that was the part that killed the romance of the story and messed it up. I give it an "A" rating anyway. |
Reviewed By: ashley On: November 24, 2002 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
hummm Im impressed |
Reviewed By: fiffii On: November 18, 2002 19:36 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great fic! It was cute and I really enjoyed it!
I didn't really notice many spelling errors and such...
Keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Jezunya [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 13:21 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehehehehehe...... lovely! wonderful lemony goodness! ^_^ they were so in-character, even down to the "Kagome... Damnit.. I love you too!" heehee ^-^ and Sango 'n' Miroku are next! yeah! XD |
Reviewed By: FloralBlackMoon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 20:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really don't see the spelling and grammar errors unless they're refering to the Japanese grammar. Anyway, I really enjoyed myself. Unqiue plot, I must say. |
Reviewed By: Squall'sScar [MediaMiner Member] On: November 12, 2002 13:25 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 6 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was the most original idea I have ever read!! I guess I'm so used to reading the same ideas over and over that I didn't expect it. THANKS!! GREAT FIC!!!! |
Reviewed By: Llewlyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 11, 2002 19:16 CST
Comment/Review:
Hehehe you should do Miroku and Sango too! That'd be great! |
Reviewed By: nekochan614 On: November 11, 2002 07:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 5 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
cute idea and interesting plot
writing could use a once over to pick out spelling errors
keep writing cause its good |
Reviewed By: Kagome-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 19:07 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
So... your spelling was a bit messed up. I'm not the one that can tell this, actally, I'm not English motherlanguage, but Italian. When I write I make a lot of faults, because I don't know the language very well. Besides, I could find some faults in what you've written. Are you writing in another language like me? Or were you just a bit lazy and didn't check up the fic two times before posting it?
Anyway, other than this, the fic is very nice. I don't like the start: it seems to be a bit too much fast, I'd prefer a slower rythm to make things a bit more realistic. The rest is very good...
Only one thing more: Kagome knows very well that she loves Inuyasha since tankoubon 18 of the original manga. And Inuyasha knows very well that Kagome loves him.
Anyway, this fic is very nice :) Please write more stuff! |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 10, 2002 12:23 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey that's pretty good! and funny to boot! r u gonna do the one bout mirk and sang? |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: November 10, 2002 12:16 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It was so cute. Please keep up the great work.
^_^ Love & Peace |
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