| "That'll Do, Son." Reviews/Comments [ 23 ] |
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Reviewed By: Bardockgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: July 15, 2003 06:53 CDT
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Damn you Toma!! How DARE you upset my hunny bunny?
Turles is great, no denying that, but - BARDOCK!!! The man is a GOD! How can anyone begin to compete with the most gorgeous, wonderful, sexiest man of all time??
Please, dear author - make the title of the chapter true, and it's all a dream... Please??
Bardock/Toma... yummmmm |
Reviewed By: arovak On: July 12, 2003 19:33 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey luv the story! Its excellent! cant wait to see what happens next! |
Reviewed By: Yosh On: March 27, 2003 22:53 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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Really great! I'm a fan of shounen ai stories, I mean it doesn't really need to have sex to be good... but now after reading this one i'm becoming fan of yaoi too.
You see, I never thought I would like to read homosexual things but the way you fanfic authors write definitely changed my mind.
Great job! You're one of the best authors I've ever read. |
Reviewed By: mischief maker [MediaMiner Member] On: March 24, 2003 20:50 CST
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I must say that I really like this story. I liked the whole eerie tension between Goku and his exenemies and the father he never met. Very cool. |
Reviewed By: Korian Stone konrinastone@gmx.net On: February 04, 2003 18:51 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow. That is a great fanfiction. poor saiyjains turned on only by seeing goku fight, but it is understanding. poor raditz, yes. and poor other new friends. and we nice that the old and cold commander zorns heart is warming up for goku. oh, and what had happend to bardock. was is to much for him seeing his son like this *giggle* i bet the whole saiyajin population in hell is going to hit on goku. and if only it is for the fact and chance, that they can say aferwards i have once sleeping with the legendary or rather was having sex with the best/strongest a saiyjin can get.
i would like it, if he can get back his tail for his time in hell or maybe keeping it and going in hell strait to level four. yeah, gt sucks at some times. but i think level 4 looks sexy and animal like wild. it shoul be drive the saiyajins more crazy.
i sure would not mind seeing there reacting at a goku as a ssj 3 and ssj 4.
i hope all of his new friends and his father get a turn with him. would raditz or turles be jeaoulsy then, hm? |
Reviewed By: atshi On: January 20, 2003 17:46 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
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more more more! YAY!! |
Reviewed By: Ichigo On: January 20, 2003 10:27 CST
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It seems so as if you write excat the fiction they i have ever want to get reading.
I am eager to hear the commentars form Goku sayajin-comarades at how he looks at ssj1 or ssj2. Wow, image it he in his black/crimson battle armor and spandex and then powerd up to ssj. that looks for sure sexy. would be a wonder if they saiyjins not getting turned on by this sight and powerplay.
*lol* cell went back with his tail between his legs so to say |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 20, 2003 06:52 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Wahahahaha!!! That was great!! I mean both the smut and the fight with Cell. I also really like Goku's changing behavior and his new attitude. Hell is really agreeing with him, it seems.
The fact that everyone in the house knew what had happened the night before and fully expected Goku to be sore was funny, too.
I would really like to know what the saiyajins thought about Goku defeating Frieza, and whether that affects their view of him as a traitor. Or do they consider that Mirai Trunks was the one who really killed him?
Anyway... MORE! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 19, 2003 21:31 CST
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*drools at the thought of Goku being in skin tight spandex* Mmm... I really liked this chapter! It'll be interesting the next time Cell returns, and I'm curious as to who else will pay Goku a visit :) I'll be waiting for the next chapter! Your ficcy is fantastic! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 22:36 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O ....whoooooaaa... Nice lemon.... VERY nice lemon. I've never read a ficcy that involved those three in THAT situation. Definitely a first and it'll most likely remain the best! Great job! |
Reviewed By: Xero Sky [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Hey, it's okay to post the steamy stuff here at MediaMiner!
I really enjoy this fic. I found it at ff.net on one of my increasingly rare visits there, and I'm glad you've moved over here -- it's much easier to comment.
I liked the very Toriyama-esque way that Goku got thrown into Hell in the first place, and I love that he's with his father and brother. Radditz, who is one of my favorite characters, has a nice relationship with Goku -- yaoi elements aside. I absolutely want to see MORE of them together.
A nice, inventive fic! Please give us more of it, and don't skimp on the steam over here on MM. It's a friendlier place for NC17s than ff.net. People don't review as much, but maybe that will change. |
Reviewed By: Lauryn [MediaMiner Member] On: January 17, 2003 20:41 CST
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Nice chapter! Why didn't ya post the steamy stuff here? *blinks* This isn't ff.net, is it? *looks around* Ah well. I'd like to read the other version :) laurynmarino@msn.com
Great work so far :) I think you should have more than 4 reviews though -.-. Please continue soon! |
Reviewed By: Lauryn On: January 17, 2003 19:31 CST
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Oh yeah. I like it. I love it. I love that to be male x male coupling. Please e-mail the corny stuff at Ashera_BG@gmx.net. Thank you.
Kakarot with Raditz, Kakrot with Turles, Kakarot with Bardock, Kakarott with Zorn. Maybe a threesome Kakarot/Turles/Raditz or Kakarot/Bardock/Raditz.
I would really like to see all this couples.
Humans can not return the bondmatelink. Good one. Thank you for that. I really don't love or hate Chichi. I only prefer to see Kakarot with another partner. Vegeta and Kakarot as bonding mates are a old one. And Vegeta had waiting far to long and to often insult him.
But who said you can only have one bonded mate and not two or a couple bondmating... i mean a bonded pair with another bonded pair are going to bond. it is a confusing though.
It is fine if you fic is going to that point, Vegeta and Kakarott as mates, but while not try something new or rare like Kakarott & Zorn or Raditz as bondmates for life or the King.
Oh, and what if with mpg. I would not mind seeing Kakarott getting pregnant with a powerfull fullblooded saiyjain child. I bet vegeta would be jeoulsy, if that child not from him too.
sorry, i am a little wreid today or rather tonight. |
Reviewed By: Ichigo On: January 17, 2003 19:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes, i would like it if i could read the steamy stuff too. Damm Fanfiction.net. Could you please mail it to me at sonichigo@web.de
Bytheway that is a fic in the way, we i like it. This one had all three of my favorites saiyajins(Kakarotto, Raditz and Bardock) in it and as an bonus even extras like Zorn and Turles.
I hope there is coming more such yaoi / shounen ai stuff and a little beat up dead bad guys and maybe you can let Kakarott let reach the next Super Saiyajin Level (maybe the king pissed him off to far...
that would be funny. who the king had mutterd that Kakarotts resting power was only at 5. he seems don't to know that his ki-level was only surpressed and he don't going super saiyajin only for a high power level. he had one even so, but with the ssj it is naturally more. but i think he can with easy all saiyajins in hell and heaven beat up without going ssj ...
in one of the next chapters.
If i remember correctly he had Level 2 and 3 reach both in his time in the afterworld.
I hope this one is going a really long one like Dominion... maybe even longer. |
Reviewed By: Lauryyn [MediaMiner Member] On: November 13, 2002 08:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Great storie. i am enjoying this, but when this one ist finished i would like to read a storie the is telling of this: We've been watching you, Kakarot. Father and I... we've been... following you. Watching you get stronger, watching you make new friends, and watching you beat your opponents... Neither of us could be more proud to have you as a part of our family.”
Also i would like read a storie about Raditz, Bardock and others in Hell, wachting Kakarott and doing other things. |
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