| "Life's a Bitch" Reviews/Comments [ 73 ] |
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Title: AWSOME
Reviewed By: Shell6_is_awsome [MediaMiner Member] On: December 24, 2008 14:03 CST
Comment/Review:
XD
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Reviewed By: unistar [MediaMiner Member] On: July 26, 2007 05:03 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
amazing story... really enjoyed reading it... good job... great work...
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Reviewed By: reader101 On: May 17, 2007 12:50 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
I really like ur fic. The ending comedy parts really striked a home run for me! The part with sesshy inching closer to the door before he delivers the news of Naraku's death, until the part where Inuyasha taunted sesshy w/ a look that clearly states 'he'll be a pussy anytime if it means he'll get some action whenever he wants! haha' was my favorite! u don't write like a begginer, btw.
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Reviewed By: Sakura Samora [MediaMiner Member] On: May 17, 2006 22:27 CDT
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very nice, wish the ending was a little longer, but still great
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Title: I HAVE AN IDEA FOR A NEW STORY THAT I WOULD LIKE YOU TO WRITE ^^
Reviewed By: Shinru [MediaMiner Member] On: February 23, 2006 19:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
What i like about your storie was that it was about what happenes in our world and the story that i would think you would be good at writting would be doing a story with everyone in school some could be teachers and some students and just be a fun comdey sorta thing and you can us any kind of mood that you would like i just think that you would be good at the part...i would write one like that but im still a beginer and im learning as i watch and read another peoples work and i like yours so i thought that it would be a perfect thing for you. You have really good talent for this stuff.
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Title: abheff
Reviewed By: abheff29 [MediaMiner Member] On: August 08, 2005 00:52 CDT
Comment/Review:
Excellent fic. And you say this is your first? I really, really liked it. Keep up the great work!!
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Title: WOW
Reviewed By: 123Meme Go On: April 25, 2005 19:28 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow love the story good beginning great ending! You're a very talented writer. Write more soon. Love ya!!!!!!!!
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Reviewed By: gunslinger_inu [MediaMiner Member] On: March 23, 2005 04:36 CST
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that was so cool. you're a really talented writer. you should consider writing something outside of fanfiction. with your gift, you'll end up a kajilionare ( even though that's not a rank....)!! Keep writing, you'll go places.
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Reviewed By: InuKaglover815 On: March 16, 2005 21:34 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
that wuz good. I don't think the end was rushed that much. hope u rite more in the future.
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Title: Life's a Bitch
Reviewed By: Fire Witch1 (@ff.net) On: February 03, 2005 09:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ROTFLMAO! I love these lines: "I killed Naraku!" Sessho exclaimed bursting through the door. Inu leapt grabbing Sessho's ridiculously long hair and yanking him back inside. R elaxing their fighting stance, Sessho gave Inu a taunting smirk that clearly said, `your bitch's telling you what to do…you pussy.' Giving Sessho a taunting look of his own, `I'll be a pussy anytime bro, cuz I'm about to get some when ever I want!' I lost it. I was laughing too hard...lets just say orange soda doesn't look good on the computer screen. I'm never drinking while reading fanfiction again! This story was great! Keeps people in the wow factor, and the laughing so hard they spit soda on the screen factor! -Britt *cleaning the screen* XD
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Reviewed By: Fire Witch1 (@ff.net) On: February 03, 2005 09:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 7 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
LMAO!!! Inu: death, death, death… I pictured one of those gremlins from the movie....XD!!! Except the little gremlin in my head was saying: die die die! in this gravily gremlin voice...no more movies at 5am for me..Great story! -Britt XD
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Reviewed By: Kellie On: May 07, 2004 00:48 CDT
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Wow, that lemon was hot *fans face*
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Reviewed By: RedHerring [MediaMiner Member] On: April 25, 2004 19:36 CDT
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Um... Wow, that was fast. It wasn't bad, per say. No it was horrible. I mean, why did he even talk to her in the first place? He just said yo, bitch for no reason? And all of a sudden, it just jumps to the resort, after no introduction to her normal life. You went far to fast with the beginning, and it's just not worth it to read past half of the first chapter.
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Reviewed By: lemon lover On: March 19, 2004 20:23 CST
Comment/Review:
great story maybe you should write a sequel i mean you should write a sequel unless you did already i should check that out now
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Reviewed By: MIztikal_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: March 05, 2004 02:46 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey! that story was very cute. i loved to read it. So keep up the good work. Krystal.
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