| "The Elements" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: IcaBob On: February 03, 2003 16:38 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
NOOOOOO! You must add more. I hate having to wait so long, it makes me forget what I read before and I don't have enough time to reread it again.
Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat On: January 06, 2003 02:54 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG...it's great!!!! Even though the chapters are a little short...I found that the whole thing was *spell binding* (for lack of a better word). My only problem is that I sat down and reads through 23 chapters...edge of my seat...only to be hit in the face with a "TBC"!!! I really liked the development of the characters and the well rounded perspectives. Can't wait to read more...I am now hitting up "Peace CHildren". |
Reviewed By: Dark Princess [MediaMiner Member] On: December 31, 2002 17:54 CST
Comment/Review:
poor Quatre. and...well poor Gundam boys really. but that Lesbian thing was to die for :D
but you where mean. leaving at THAT part:( oh well as long as you continue
Shinagami smiles apon thee,
~*~Dark Princess~*~ |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: December 30, 2002 23:25 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST CONTINUE! I love it all so far, and I hate waiting.
^_^ Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: susan On: December 30, 2002 01:30 CST
Comment/Review:
ooooh!!! duo's coming around! YAY! finally... and kewl stuff wit tro. and quat. i luv. those guyz!!! but ergh.. milli is nasty! |
Reviewed By: susan On: December 30, 2002 01:14 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
AWWWWWWWWWWWWWWWW POOR TORMENTED DUO!! silly thing doesn't have a clue wut he's missin does he?
hee hee... getem hee-chan! (well eventually) |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama On: December 29, 2002 23:02 CST
Comment/Review:
NO!!! MORE!!!!*falls on keyboardadhfIDSHFVB'GL S .hjKBKJcJDSGFlgbcvsbv... and starts crying*
mooooooorrrreeeeee.... please... why do you always have to end it like that!!?!?!?! |
Reviewed By: Squall-sama [MediaMiner Member] On: December 27, 2002 13:49 CST
Comment/Review:
*grabs computer screen, picks it up and shakes it around a bit then throws it across the room*
DAMN!! WHY DO YOU ALWAYS END IT LIKE--*THAT*!?!?!?!
*bangs head on keyboard* i need more....
don't tkae so long next time--hurry...... |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: December 27, 2002 01:49 CST
Comment/Review:
ADD MORE SOON!!! *Falls over* |
Reviewed By: susan On: December 30, 2002 01:52 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
OMG!!!
you have to write more soon!!!
WUT THE hell is up wit heero??
OMG never saw dat comin. get duo!!! yes yes.. duo duo duo duo *chants* duo duo duo duo.....
c yaz,
Susan |
Reviewed By: IcaBob On: December 10, 2002 21:14 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
YOU MUST ADD MORE!!! That is just plain cruel to leave such a big cliff-hanger. I love this story so far and you have to add more as soon as possible...like tomorrow. ^_~
Anyway, keep up the GREAT work
Love & Peace |
Reviewed By: Shadow_Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: June 04, 2003 00:54 CDT
Comment/Review:
Well I must say that I really LOVED this story...it was great...but what's up with the ending?????? He just decided out of nowhere that he was going to save Duo and within two sentances it's over? No...you can't let it end like that! You let almost everyone (Including three of the five G boys) die and you have that chick Kali telling them to go out and love? errrrr...Oh well I guess it's your story and you were probably getting tired of it anyway...but keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: Yume Maxwell-Yuy [MediaMiner Member] On: November 27, 2002 08:26 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
waiii. Update again soon, please. I wanna see what happens next. duoXheero. yuuum. You have a great writing style and this story is very interesting. I love Heero's hight. I love little heeros. soooo cute. well, keep up the good work.
2X1 foreva.
Ja ne |
Reviewed By: Elle-FaTe2x1 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 24, 2002 20:04 CST
Comment/Review:
I love this fic so much! I was going to review on ff.net but ur account is gone. |
Reviewed By: meggy On: November 24, 2002 23:05 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
awesome fic!! totally! i speak the truth and wait on the edge of my seat for tthe next chapter! ^-^ |
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