| "What is Love?" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 17:10 CST
Comment/Review:
hehe, i like chapter three! a very fustrated vegeta and a very emotional bluma...yum..nice combo for a lemon!!! lol
can't wait for the rest ~.^ |
Reviewed By: Bulma75 On: December 15, 2002 16:38 CST
Comment/Review:
Its a good story so far, but chapter 3 was really short...try to make your chapters longer ^_^ keep writing |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: December 15, 2002 15:18 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
good story I like this one very much |
Reviewed By: hota-chan On: April 01, 2003 23:01 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
love it, especially the lemon part |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 26, 2002 14:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
last chapter:awwwwwww!! vegeta can be a real sweety when he wants to be..Please update with another chapter as soon as possible! in other words a.s.a.p! Great fic though its going great! |
Reviewed By: diva_eyez [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 21:33 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
very good fic so far! keep up the good work! |
Reviewed By: TrunksGirl12 On: November 25, 2002 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great so far but what happens!!!!!I have to know!!! |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 25, 2002 15:28 CST
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
It goes to show how much Vegeta really cares/love Bulma very touching story and keep it up |
Reviewed By: Kewla [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 13:24 CST
Comment/Review:
It's good, write more soon. Doesn't Vegeta get to kill the bastard in this one? I hope so.
Waiting............................ |
Reviewed By: VampireGoddess On: November 16, 2002 09:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hey update i wanna know what happens!! good luck 4 more chapters |
Reviewed By: vegetafan On: November 15, 2002 18:06 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
i like it so far so keep on writing |
Reviewed By: Chibi-Dacras babysitter [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 10:04 CST
Comment/Review:
**evil grin** if he kills the weakling, can I do strange experiments on what's left of the guy? **maniacle laughter**
*cough*
Great start, wish ya luck on the next chappie and can't wait for it to come out. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: November 14, 2002 20:19 CST
Rating(s):Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
this is a good start and begining. |
Reviewed By: tristar49 [MediaMiner Member] On: February 07, 2003 11:49 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
it has been a while and I missed three chapters but I cought up love this fic keep up the good work. |
Reviewed By: Fanfic Lover On: February 21, 2003 17:39 CST
Comment/Review:
awwwwwwwww I wanted Vegeta naked....oh well I can imagine that from the lemons I read. Continue please! |
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