| "Not Who They Used To Be" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
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Reviewed By: kaoru On: January 19, 2003 11:09 CST
Comment/Review:
poor ryou ;_;
but... he's so beautiful when he's hurt ^__________^
plese udapte soon |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: January 18, 2003 20:09 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
poor poor ryou-chan!!!!!
sniff
poor poor bakura!
So, when's the rest for? Hey, maybe Seto could build a space ship and set off for Mars and then there could be an intergalactical space fight in space!
Don't mind me, it's the caffeine speaking. I must obey my temporary master.
Please continue! Don't become like me, ne? God, I should write...
Ooo space sex!!!
Dammeeeeeeeeet dondé estan los onces? No estoy contenta, porque esta fiction tiene que ser notada con onces!
Space Sex (insert batman sitcom music here)
I should stop now ne?
Well I won't.
NOT!
Ja! |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 22:03 CST
Comment/Review:
Good! Can't wait for next chappie!! |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: December 29, 2002 07:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
MOSHERS!!!!!! merry christmas charlie brown!
anyways... how dare you cut now! you're as bad as the two towers!! though there's enough yaoi hinting in it for me to be in a very good mood... so um... uh... why don't they allow 11s here? pity... must hack and change ^^^
ja minna! |
Reviewed By: NICK On: December 29, 2002 04:26 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
COOL |
Reviewed By: Bishojo_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 28, 2002 15:50 CST
Comment/Review:
You need to continue soon! I almost forgot about your story! Pluse its really good! Is Seto going to jump in on Ryou and Yugi while their Yamis are away? |
Reviewed By: Katmon{AKA Madame KK} On: December 11, 2002 15:55 CST
Comment/Review:
Oh, yes, very good indeed!! I can't wait to read more!!
Ja!
Katmon =^.^= |
Reviewed By: lil dudette On: December 04, 2002 17:03 CST
Comment/Review:
so sad *blows on tissue*......iluffit^_^ |
Reviewed By: lemonaddict [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 12:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oooooooooo more!! dis is coolies!! mucho so too!! heh... i should be writing... actually i should either be working or at my driving theory class, but instead I'm lazing about trying to get some decent rest. anyways, you have to continue soonies!!! |
Reviewed By: sailorcelestia [MediaMiner Member] On: December 02, 2002 22:02 CST
Comment/Review:
I really like this story keep it up! |
Reviewed By: Katya On: December 02, 2002 20:48 CST
Comment/Review:
okay i may as well review here too. lol. CAN U PLEASE UPDATE??? PLEEEEEEEEEASE?????????? okay rush of adrenaline over. lol. i loved it as usual.
oh yeah. i'm lazy so i'll put my ratings here: 10, 10, 10, 10, 11. hehe. ja ne! |
Reviewed By: loanshark [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 21:20 CST
Comment/Review:
oh. my. that. was. interesting...
btw, is the first story done after 10 chapters? coz i don't remember seeing the "soon...soon" part...
ok, please update soon!! i liked it a lot...poor yami! *sigh* silly seto. snort |
Reviewed By: Bishojo_shadow [MediaMiner Member] On: December 04, 2002 19:33 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I was hoping you would continue this wonderful story! You are very talented, please update soon! |
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