| "Those Tantric Moments" Reviews/Comments [ 16 ] |
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Reviewed By: . On: November 02, 2003 10:33 CST
Comment/Review:
All I can say is update
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Reviewed By: Raina [MediaMiner Member] On: October 02, 2003 00:13 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 6 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
GIVE US LEMON RIGHT NOW! HOW DARE YOU LEAVE IT LIKE THAT? I'm sorry about that. Ehehehehehe. But hurry up and give lemon. hardcore lemon.
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Reviewed By: NSBVEGETA [MediaMiner Member] On: September 20, 2003 13:33 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
HOW DARE U NOT WRITE A LEMON!!!!!!! UP UP UP WITH THE RATING DAMN IT !! (LOL)
PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!! LEMON GET INSPIRED I BEG OF U !!!!! SWEET KAMI!!! I WANT A TANTRIC MOMENT HERE!!!
PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!
WRITE MORE LEMON LEMON LEMON!!!!!! IM URGING UUU!!!!!
U HAVE BEEN WARNED AS WELL .....
LATER! ME LOVE THIS STORY! |
Reviewed By: Misery Child [MediaMiner Member] On: September 19, 2003 20:31 CDT
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This is pretty darn awesome. Please keep up the good work. Can't wait for the next chapter. You're doing very good job, especially with building the tension. |
Reviewed By: The Oujis Mate [MediaMiner Member] On: September 18, 2003 20:23 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
That was so good. Please write another chapter soon, I can't wait to see it. |
Reviewed By: anony On: September 18, 2003 13:18 CDT
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Didn't read this the first time around ~ but very interesting idea ! I'm definitely voting for an update/sequel. Great start! Very humorous and sensual B/V interaction ~ continue plz? |
Reviewed By: Jess On: July 10, 2003 15:50 CDT
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One freaking page and you quit writting how can you do that do us |
Reviewed By: Nikoru [MediaMiner Member] On: January 23, 2003 22:22 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
hehehe. That's so funny, I hope you continue. ^_^ Please.... |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang On: January 22, 2003 01:38 CST
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This is a threatening review ... if you don't write more soon, I will threaten you!!!!!
YOU HAVE BEEN WARNED!!!!!!!!!!! ^.~ |
Reviewed By: Masquerade_Dragon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 21, 2002 01:21 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh HELL YEAH!! As usual, you have shown me your wonderful talent in writing, and I hate you for it. Are you going to be writing more? And what happened to 'The Words We Ache To Say' dammit?!? *Cries for a day* I want more of that!!
Hee hee, I love ya J- oh wait, I probably shouldn't use your real name, so I'll call you Duo no Tsuin instead. ;) |
Reviewed By: Ms2ry Angle7 On: November 19, 2002 11:58 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
Dam now I know what guys go through after being teased only to be left hanging (: You want insperation fine here goes, If at first you don't succeed try,try again. ( And if that doesn't work I have two initals for you K.S). If you update I'll give you the answer for the initals in my next review! |
Reviewed By: Dragon Master Duelist On: November 15, 2002 23:03 CST
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I like it. You should keep going |
Reviewed By: Dawn Dusk [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:41 CST
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This is very good! hehe "we've done that before" that was funny great work and keep it up! ~Dawn Dusk |
Reviewed By: Tina Lang [MediaMiner Member] On: November 15, 2002 19:18 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Oh wow, this is wonderful!! You definitely need to write more, even if there's no lemon! Although a lemon would definitely be very nice!
But shame on you for ending this chapter so soon! Just leaving me hanging like that, all caught up in the moment (so to speak), and then just stop! Hehe. You'd better continue this!!! ....Please?!?!?!?! ^.^
Love,
Tina |
Reviewed By: passionova On: November 15, 2002 17:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Comment/Review:
You are right.My first gut instinct was to splutter in indignation and start complaining that this chapter finished there. And then I stopped. Why would I splutter and gasp..unless I REALLY enjoyed it? The characters came alive and you set the tone perfectly. I swear *I* shivered when he whispered "Bulma " :)
Please dont let your anxiety regarding lemon hinder the progress of this fic. You know, the slow sensual road to seduction can be far more captivating and enthralling than the inevitable act itself. Good luck. and may the inspiration hammer hit you hard enough on the head to allow you to continue this.. :) |
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