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Reviewed By: malikzgurl [MediaMiner Member] On: February 16, 2003 15:55 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: this was great....
when's there gonna be the malik/marik pairing |
Reviewed By: AMG On: February 15, 2003 21:28 CST Comment/Review: Cool have more chappy out really soon! I love it. This fic is a lot of fun! ^_^ Really! Okay Ja ne! |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber [MediaMiner Member] On: February 15, 2003 14:12 CST Comment/Review: I'm glad you updated. There's a small problem with this latest chapter though. The text goes off the page, but you can't scroll across to read it. Maybe you could fix it? Thanks. |
Reviewed By: EvenStar On: February 14, 2003 21:59 CST Rating(s):Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: great fic. Some mistakes,but other than that really good. could you fix the alignments? cuz it's typed to far to the right and you can't read it right.. well thanx for updating! |
Reviewed By: Iyasu [MediaMiner Member] On: February 03, 2003 20:46 CST Comment/Review: What number am I? I hope it's 10 because you need to update this! Marik and Malik's attitudes are making this very interesting..hehe. Sooo.... WHEN IS THE LEMON COMING!? Fast, I hope. *smirks* Good job too! |
Reviewed By: My Own Shukuun [MediaMiner Member] On: January 27, 2003 19:59 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review: This is very cute and interesting. I like it! ^_^ and sice you said if you get at least -10- reviews, i thought, 'what the hell, why not review'? great story! keep it going! |
Reviewed By: Aluana [MediaMiner Member] On: January 16, 2003 16:51 CST Comment/Review: really kool fic. I look forward to reading more. |
Reviewed By: Millenia [MediaMiner Member] On: January 15, 2003 15:21 CST Comment/Review: I like how you brought the six guys together and a little Yaoi beacuse I DO NOT like it but a little I can take I suppose. GOOD STORY! |
Reviewed By: Danny boy On: December 22, 2002 19:15 CST Comment/Review: LOved your story!!
Keep at it. |
Reviewed By: Kat On: December 22, 2002 19:14 CST Comment/Review: Awsome story!!!!!!!!
Write more quick.
Hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Kale On: December 22, 2002 19:13 CST Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10 Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10 Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10 Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10 Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review: Cool story.
keep writing |
Reviewed By: Katmon [MediaMiner Member] On: November 23, 2002 17:03 CST Comment/Review: Katmon: Oh... That's so kawaii!!! *huggles Seiji*
Seiji: *is turning blue*
Kurai: Hikari, you're gonna kill Seiji-baka...
Katmon: Oops! *let's go* Sowwy, Seiji-san...
Seiji: Don't...*gasp*...do that...*gasp*...again!
Katmon: I was just trying to explain how happy I was... *sobs and runs into corner*
Kurai: I'll go comfort her, you finish this! *hurries after Katmon*
Seiji: Katmon-chan's right, neh? It was good, and we wait calmly for you to continue...
Ja!
Seiji! |
Reviewed By: Yuki-chan On: November 18, 2002 14:49 CST Comment/Review: Utterly kawaii!! Bakura/Ryou forever! They're so......CUTE!!!! Please keep up the good work, and update, PREEEEETY PLEEEEEEEEEEEEEASE??? |
Reviewed By: Jadesaber On: November 16, 2002 22:13 CST Comment/Review: I think that this is really good. The only thing is that, don't you think it was a little early for them to be sleeping together and kissing. I mean, they just met that morning. I think you should have waited a few days at lease. Anyway, please post more soon! |
Reviewed By: Bronze Eagle [MediaMiner Member] On: November 16, 2002 21:25 CST Comment/Review: I really like this fic, especially since I like all of these pairings, but it's a little predictable when, for instance, Yugi, Ryou-chan, and Malik all eat dinner and go up to their rooms and think about their others, then Yami, Bakura, and Marik go home and do the exact same thing. Mondo-cuteness all around, though. Ja ne, minna-chan!!! |
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