| "Only In Your Eyes Am I Worthy" Reviews/Comments [ 60 ] |
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 09, 2005 10:44 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A very interesting chapter, I thought there was only one alternate timeline , but three is an interesting twist. I'm really loking forward to the girl talk and Shinji and Misato's talk. Please let Rei get and follow some good advice. Will Shinji and Misato discuss the more interesting events of late, I wonder.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 08, 2005 09:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Great chapter, I really hope that Shinji or Rei take the initiative soon, but I love how the story is unfolding. I find the glimpses into the alternate time line very interesting, can't wait to read more.
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Reviewed By: A-Z Mark II [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 19:24 CST
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Glad to see an update to this story. It had nearly been forgotten, but now, it is once more back in the reading list. Good chapters!
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 07, 2005 16:56 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Anouther great chapter, I just loved it and can't wait to see how these new twists develope. I had to increase the rating I gave because after I started rereading your story I remembered how much I enjoyed it.
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Reviewed By: Shard [MediaMiner Member] On: December 06, 2005 16:31 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
It's great to read more of you're wonderful story and I sorry to about all the difficulties. Honestly it had been so long since you wrote anything I was thinking you quit altogether. Any way I loved the chapter and look forward to reading more.
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Reviewed By: forechunkukee [MediaMiner Member] On: May 24, 2005 22:35 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Slick job ya did here, very cool. What can I say? There's nothing here to really complain about is there? The worst thing i can complain about is the fact you haven't updated in quite a bit (don't feel too pressured, we [at least I do] understand that stuff happens). I think it would be a tragedy for this to end like "So Happy Together" (i.e no definite "ending") because this fic, in my humble opinion is just as well written. I would hate to see this "end" with no ending. Now onto the review ~! (what you thought that was the review? I was just commenting!) I love your style. Amazing. Perfect blend of dialogue/personal thoughts, and contrary to what some people seem to think, I thought the characters were mostly "in character," and any discrepancies were explained according to the story. Your spelling and grammar were very sharp (at least the english was, I don't speak/understand German, and can only understand a tiny bit of Japanese, so who am I to judge?) and only had the occasional hiccup or two. I also thought the addition of German was very nice. I was impressed with the story thus far, as this is the main reason I would wish for this fic to continue. You opened up a whole lot of possibilites, i would like to see where this goes. Overall, I have loved reading this and seriously hope you continue. I assure you, if you shold choose to update this (and I seriously hope you do), there will be plenty of people overjoyed to see it and I among them.
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Reviewed By: Death-By-Minnow [MediaMiner Member] On: April 08, 2005 09:48 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
There should be some kind of law against stopping good fanfics without finishing them. Either get back here and finish it or don't write at all! At the very least leave some kind of apology, and say that you won't be back to finish it instead of leaving everyone hanging like this. It's downright mean.
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Reviewed By: Phoneix On: October 02, 2004 03:27 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Get on with it!
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Title: :D
Reviewed By: Oblivsan On: September 07, 2004 08:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
ahem....all i have to say is one thing...CONTINUE!!!!!
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Reviewed By: Fu Mon Chu [MediaMiner Member] On: August 24, 2004 05:38 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
This was definitly a most enjoyable fic. Please, do me a favor and continue to write more chapters. As long as they continue to have your unique style in them I will continue to enjoy them. I have insomnia untill around 3 o'clock and reading fanfics is a favorite pass-time. It helps if I'm reading stories from a talented author. I would especially like to see more chapters from you. Thanx =D
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Reviewed By: Rebah On: May 25, 2004 02:29 CDT
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Interesting fic, to say the least. It's quite different from most others of it's kind, but not in a bad way. Keep up the good work.
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Reviewed By: does anyone care? On: May 08, 2004 13:00 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
best eva fic i'v read evah!!! was reading on ff.net previosly i wanna print this out for my friends n' stuff they'ed love it ^_^
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Reviewed By: DarkFeenix On: April 02, 2004 09:37 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
one of the best fics I have read, try to update more often :) blah before I started reading your fic I was devoted asuka/shinji fan but after reading your fic I can't even think of that pair anymore... got to find more great rei/shinji fics :) some typos here and there, or I'm just seeing things, haven't slept in last 20 hours. And 1 more thing, pleeease get rei and shinji bit forwad :P every other pair is moving but them :)
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Title: chap 16
Reviewed By: Shadow Megatron [MediaMiner Member] On: October 21, 2003 09:52 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 9 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Enjoyable indeed Please for the love of goodness Don't wait sooooooo long to update next time Ne?
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Reviewed By: neo vash [MediaMiner Member] On: September 27, 2003 03:39 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
its a great fanfic
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