Reviewed By: Iyasu [MediaMiner Member] On: November 05, 2003 16:03 CST
Rating(s):Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Your fic was riveting! I couldn't stop reading! I think that you should have Zarbon capture the two, and cage them, along with their mates... you could have a character death or two if you wanted.
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