| "Shall I Call You Princess?" Reviews/Comments [ 28 ] |
Reviewed By: Cierzo [MediaMiner Member] On: July 18, 2005 19:18 CDT
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You say that reviewing works... there's still hope for me if I ask you to continue an old fic? It's "Lonesome Moon", I really loved the beginning... About "Shall I Call You Princess" I liked the way you developed the idea, taking into account Marron's feelings about acting so unlike himself. Not my favourite fic of yours, but I still enjoyed it because although I'm into the classical Marron-uke clichée, I can't help but wonder at how well you write whatever the plot (or lack thereof XDD) you choose.
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Title: Whips...
Reviewed By: !PeachLove! On: July 09, 2005 03:54 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Holy crap, that was hot! Although, I agree with Gateau completely. He should get to hold the whip. Whips...Heheheh...Anyways, maybe you could do a sequel. Equally hot. luv, !PeachLove!
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: May 25, 2005 06:19 CDT
Rating(s):Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Marron as Dom is just tooo TOOO sexy! You totally ruin my panties every time, but I love the lemons so much I don't care, in fact I beg for more! keep them coming, (Litterally) I have been Miko deprived for FAR too long!
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Title: Mad Applause
Reviewed By: Harmonie Des Anges [MediaMiner Member] On: December 03, 2004 11:37 CST
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I would love to leave you a happy carefree and funny review, would love to but can't. This story is amazing and I adore every moment of it. I also love the way your delving into the complexities of a potentally unfair relationship. I also think that Marron is so right in what he's doing. I'd be pissed off too. I'm so not going to write what I think you should write next but I'm just wanting to see where you take this. I look forward to your next chapter.
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Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: February 05, 2004 23:44 CST
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MIko Update NOW!!!! I insist! I love you, Cody-san
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Reviewed By: yaoi loving otaku [MediaMiner Member] On: August 20, 2003 13:20 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
oh wow. marron is one of a kind. this is a first. i love it. ya go marron. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas [MediaMiner Member] On: May 06, 2003 01:15 CDT
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I should b furious that you left off where you did, bt well I am too happy you even updated to really get upset. I love ya Miko keep on writing! |
Reviewed By: Braided Baka On: April 26, 2003 16:42 CDT
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
A sadistic Marron? *Get's all stary eyed*
Oh what I would do to have a mas-
*Panics* I'm not a slave.
But any ways I REALLY LOVED IT!! ^_^ |
Reviewed By: Topaz Kat [MediaMiner Member] On: February 04, 2003 10:28 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
You do not see many "Marron on top" fics, especially where he's being playfully sadistic in order to prove himself to a lover. This is a very good story and I can't wait to see it completed. |
Reviewed By: tygrrlyli On: January 31, 2003 21:50 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 9 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 9 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I love the idea of Marron being the dominant one. I'm so sick of seeing him as the uke that this is new and refreshing. Anyway, i'ts always fun to watch Gateau squirm. Please, please continue along this story. |
Reviewed By: little one On: January 20, 2003 00:08 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Sorry for all the tens! I'm not a brown noser or anything. I just REALLY liked it! SPICY! And I love Marron being so agressive. Why aren't you uploading another one? ::sniff sniff:: I want MORE! Sorry. Great job. |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: December 25, 2002 16:17 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
Miko I honestly think this is the best thing you could have written to my hentai, yaoi obsessed little mind. Although it isn't very nice to do to someone who has fantasies of Marron-chan in compromising and unique situations everyday, when her boyfriend is out of town and she can't glomp onto him!!!! You already know how much I love your work and how I keep on following you around from site to site, and I will continue to do so! (I swear I feel like a stalker sometimes...)I can't wait for another chapter on this fic. Please keep writing your now hooked little Yaoi slave swears to read and review faithfully. ( @_@ Must worship Evil Hentai Slug...need more yaoi...) |
Reviewed By: Cody Thomas On: December 25, 2002 12:35 CST
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Miko I think this is one of the best things you have ever written. And I can't glomp onto my boyfriend right now. You know you shouldn't do this to people who fantasise almost nightly of Marron in several unique situations when their boyfriends are out of town! It just isn't fair! Now I can't make him read it or have him ask me to put on a leather outfit and don a... nevermind keep on writing ok? |
Reviewed By: Fala [MediaMiner Member] On: December 22, 2002 12:37 CST
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You know, Miko? I'm really beginning to think that this one is my favourite of your fics ^_^ Seme Marron is all too rare in the BH fandom and you've portrayed him surprisingly well. Escpecially in this chapter. I agree with the one reviewer who suggested giving us a few hints as to how Gateau is thinking throughout all this, and you did that quite well here (particularly in the bit with the dagger). I rather liked the part with the pentacle and the ofuda (you know? For all their uses, hardly anyone puts candles in their BH lemons. I should try that sometime). Very creative and appropriate. Also, the aforementioned OOC was smoothed over in this chapter and it seemed like it was better thought out, so kudos on that. Thanx for giving me credit and a plug on the fanart. Much appreciated ^__^ I do look forward to seeing more of this, hopefully sometime soon. You've got me hooked. I'll come drooling back for more ^_- |
Reviewed By: Windshale On: December 21, 2002 17:24 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 5 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 8 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 7 of 10 Comment/Review:
O.O candles, restraints and vinyl oh my! I wonder if Gateau will learn fast before strike three! MmmmMarron being dominant is surprising in a good way. Continue please.. and uh you forgot a good crop besides Tira's whip :P WOO! |
Reviewed By: Akari On: December 21, 2002 04:34 CST
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Gah! My last review was eaten! Evil thing *kiks it* I was trying to say that I'm loving this and need more. |
Reviewed By: shrewlaura On: December 20, 2002 16:55 CST
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ACK!!!! You have got to write the next chapter and SOON!! I need to read more of this! I jsut keep imagining how hot Marron looks in that outfit. :D |
Reviewed By: sunandshadow On: December 18, 2002 00:11 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 7 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 8 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 8 of 10
Overall Rating: 8 of 10 Comment/Review:
Heh, this is fun. Marron playing dom is a hilarious idea. :) You should try to show a little more what both characters are thinking of the situation, that will help with both humor and sexiness, and reassure people that Gateau's not actually suffering, except from an untouched hard-on. ;) |
Reviewed By: Ranma On: November 26, 2002 22:40 CST
Rating(s):Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I didn't pay attention to spelling b/c my mind automatically corrects it. I absolutely love you! Before I found this fic, I was just thinking that I wanted to make a fic where Marron tied Gateau to a bed. I love all of your other fics too. I'm going to come check this site for your fics way more often now. PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Continue this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! MORE MARRON AND GATEAU!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! |
Reviewed By: Rhythm On: November 25, 2002 01:11 CST
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*laughs* Well, Gateu, you brought this on your self. *pats the author on the back* this has to continue! ^^ |
Reviewed By: Creamer On: November 20, 2002 09:12 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 8 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 9 of 10 Comment/Review:
Yes!! Continue!! It sounds like there will finally be a fic in which Marron is the seme! Finish this. I want to know! |
Reviewed By: JJ On: November 20, 2002 01:39 CST
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Not enough Marron/Gateau in the world. Heh heh heh. |
Reviewed By: Fala [MediaMiner Member] On: November 19, 2002 20:18 CST
Comment/Review:
Marron... is...a...queen. ::falls off chair laughing fit to die:: This fic has some rather haneous OOC-ness, but it's all good, because the humour more than makes up for it. I've always thought that Marron could be a seme if he really really wanted to... and if he was really really willing to don the leather. Hmmm, I'm thinking a certain fanart by yours truly inspired this little number, eh? ::snick:: Either way, all I have to say for this is...
"FOK SAKE, LASS! WRITE MORE OR THIS BARMY BRIT WILL BEAT YER YAOI-GIRL ARSE!!!"
Er, write more? Pwease?
P.S. Chibi Gateau refuses to come out of my sock drawer until a continuation is made.
::a muffled shout is heard from upstairs:: "Yeah Miss Miko. Wwite more about my Mawwon so I can come out of here! It smells in this dwawer!"
You see? Wer'e all hoping for mooooooore, so get on it before I have to come after you with a pointy stick ^_- |
Reviewed By: Gemini the Chibi Majin Angel On: November 18, 2002 15:13 CST
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Everything 10!!!
yes, wonderful, Go Marron-kun! ^_^
Pleez continue with this loverly little ficcy Miko No Hoshi great authoress of kinkyness!
ok, must go, still in school. hate school....stupid Alabama....
Have fun! Later Dayz and Tanx!! ^_^
-Gemi & Chibits |
Reviewed By: Black_angel [MediaMiner Member] On: November 17, 2002 21:30 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 10 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
5 reviews, huh? Does it count if they all come from me? Probably not, but it was worth a try wasn't it? I tried, doesn't that count for anything these days? I just really really want you to write more in this. Please? Well, I'm off on my self-appointed mission now... to get more people to read this and review it! Black Angel |
Reviewed By: Nuku [MediaMiner Member] On: November 22, 2002 12:34 CST
Rating(s):Style of Writing: 10 of 10
Spelling & Grammar: 10 of 10
Originality/Creativity: 10 of 10
Enjoyment Factor: 9 of 10
Overall Rating: 10 of 10 Comment/Review:
I know someone said that this is OOC but I can really see this happening. I mean it, Marron would be a great Domme considering that he has to have complete control over his magic and all. The thought of him being seme isn't seen much because he's feminine but it can happen. Keep writting please? |
Reviewed By: Nozomi On: February 07, 2003 10:25 CST
Comment/Review:
Very nice....I'm really liking this so far... I would love to read more... *gives u lil puppy-dog pouty face* please? |
Reviewed By: Akari On: November 24, 2002 23:43 CST
Comment/Review:
*hissy fit*
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